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The Lady
Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634
The Southwest

0 posted 2006-07-24 06:32 PM



dirty
bony old tom cat
wailin’ round my door
howlin’ hunger

twining round my legs
tail held high  
purring whispers  
lapping from my best sugar bowl
with a tongue
that’s been God knows where

I can tell by the way
you seek comfort of a warm lap
wrap yourself around me at night
this ain’t your first time in Dodge


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Dark Stranger
Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631
West Coast
1 posted 2006-07-24 06:38 PM


first time in a dodge?
you mean caddy don't ya?
(grin)..enjoyed it lady one

perrrfect rendering

The Lady
Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634
The Southwest
2 posted 2006-07-24 06:45 PM



This cat didn't look like a
caddy cat to me... smile

Thank you Stranger.


Rick
Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 2903
Victoria, Australia
3 posted 2006-07-24 07:49 PM


A lucky Tom indeed my friend and your kind heart led it to a warm meal and resting place, good on you. Enjoyed the tale dear Lady.

Sincerely
Rick

The Lady
Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634
The Southwest
4 posted 2006-07-24 10:00 PM




Thank you so much Rick.
I love strays.

passing shadows
Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577
displaced
5 posted 2006-07-25 01:01 AM


I love strays too  

I had one at work who took forever to trust me but finally he got to where he would sit in my lap...but then he got a girlfriend and she liked hamburgers and chicken nuggets better than my gourmet cat food so they started living at McDonald's...oh well

The Lady
Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634
The Southwest
6 posted 2006-07-25 01:10 AM




Dadgum strays will leave you for
fast food every time.

It's wonderful when you can get
them to trust you, isn't it?

aziza
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since 2006-07-09
Posts 2995
Lumpy Oatmeal makes me Crazy!
7 posted 2006-07-25 02:08 AM


I really like this.  You touched me and this poem says so much about you.  Great job.

aziza

The Lady
Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634
The Southwest
8 posted 2006-07-25 04:05 PM




Thank you aziza.
You're a stray lover too, huh?

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