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JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16
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Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

0 posted 2006-07-22 01:19 AM


Hong Kong Lady

One nite in Mongkok
I was with my lady,
drinking Hong Kong wine
having a real fine time.
She had a way of
driving me crazy
that's why I called her
my Hong Kong lady.
She's my number one.

Turn out the lights.
Holding me tight.
Desires made clear.
Whispering in my ear.
Calling me baby.
Driving me crazy.
Oh how I love
my Hong Kong lady.
She's my number one.

JamesLee
20July
2006
Mongkok is a seedy
area in Hong Kong.



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aziza
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since 2006-07-09
Posts 2995
Lumpy Oatmeal makes me Crazy!
1 posted 2006-07-22 01:46 AM


I like your style.
JamesMichael
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Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
2 posted 2006-07-24 08:16 PM


Thank you aziza...I wrote this as a song...of course I don't know how to write songs...so I did the best I could...James
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