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Drowning |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989
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Was that really a twinkle I saw there, in your eye, or was my own vision clouded by a heart held in sigh? Was it mere imagination that made the moment hold a perfect sensation, almost as if you had read my mind and knew that somehow, you would be forever held within a rhyme but, I could have sworn that it almost seemed real just a few seconds longer... did you allow me to feel the warmth of that moment... or, did you feel it too? You know, I'd almost stopped believing in that thing they call love; but was it a clue sent from above when the clouds suddenly parted and the sun began to shine through? {I caught myself drowning in pools of blue...} Maybe after all, what they say might be true.... you don't always find love, sometimes, it finds you..... seek the flame within yourself and let your soul be cleansed by the fire of love. Axel Ekenstierna [This message has been edited by Gentle Spirit (05-25-2006 07:27 PM).] |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Donna, that was exquisite! Your gentle spirit deserves to be loved as you do love. Highly poetic ink flows from your fine pen. Sending you a big, warm, hug-o-love, Linda  |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
talk about soft and gentle Ritchie wrote your song long ago; you've just been waiting to hear the right one sing it for you and then follow up on the message  and you know exactly what I mean |
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Lighthousebob Member Elite
since 2000-06-14
Posts 4725California |
I do think that it is as you've perhaps suggested... We (humans with our human nature) do make love much too much an illusive thing when indeed it is so very much an inclusive part of our being. Sorry for the over expounding here, but I really really liked your poem's ending. -Bob |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
thanks all, for tolerating my mood. I've been told, its when you aren't looking for it that it walks right into you  thanks, and much peace to all.. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
love this Donna!! |
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picturegramic Member
since 2006-05-16
Posts 112 |
ending sings of love! Enjoyed the read. picturegramic :) |
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Will Rhyme Member
since 2006-05-22
Posts 149 |
"just a few seconds longer... did you allow me to feel the warmth of that moment..." ummmm, make my brain think! Nice work..... Will |
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XOx Uriah xOX Senior Member
since 2006-02-11
Posts 1403Virginia |
wow ! ::sighs:: never stop believing. Never !!!! NEVER !!!!!!!! :: bows :: |
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OwlSA Member Rara Avis
since 2005-11-07
Posts 9347Durban, South Africa |
Floating on those wispy clouds! Lovely! - Owl |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
If this is what it is to drown, it seems quite warm... and welcome... very welcome... |
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