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Open Poetry #38

Rainy Days and Mind Games

XOx Uriah xOX
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since 2006-02-11

Posts 1403
Virginia

0 posted 2006-07-16 02:42 PM

As long as there is the thought
of there being missing pieces
the whole picture cannot be seen.

It's impossible to find all the pieces
of a puzzle that was never jigsawed.

With minds that see seperation
You will always have something
to piece together and search for.

Keep trying to find where you fit and
the puzzle will never be completed.

Spend your rainy days as you wish,
but a beautiful world stands beneath
the sun and waits for you to come play.

Seymour Tabin
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since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

1 posted 2006-07-16 03:17 PM

Uriah,
One of your best that I have read.

Sunshine

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since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

2 posted 2006-07-16 04:02 PM

Larry, that sounds like an invitation
to come and play in the rain...
if only to watch the puddles ripple
and await the rainbow!

Enjoyed very much!

K

The Lady
Member Rara Avis

since 2005-12-26

Posts 7634
The Southwest

3 posted 2006-07-16 04:29 PM

This one turns the mind Uriah. Beautiful.

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