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Crystal Tears |
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divine chaos Senior Member
since 2006-07-09
Posts 617dancing 'neath the moon 
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Beneath a jewel encrusted sky Amidst twinkling amber fireflies In field of jade, by sapphire pool ivory toes slip into shimmering cool Emerald eyes glisten 'neath ebony veil Topaz wings through midnight sail Diamond heart heeds not the call Past ruby lips crystal tears fall |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
I love the bold strokes you painted with vivid colors from your personal palette. Thanks for sharing! |
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aziza Member Elite
since 2006-07-09
Posts 2995Lumpy Oatmeal makes me Crazy! |
Lovely. |
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themute Member
since 2006-05-08
Posts 469Maryland |
a flow of passion colored words delited, my lilly white face smiles with ruby lips |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
ooooooooo wow |
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BeautifullyBroken84 Junior Member
since 2005-11-16
Posts 11Minnesota, USA |
Beginning lines with prepositions...I attempted this myself once before! Very well written, bold imagery! ~* I write the waves of my emotions, with my pen as my ship and my heart as my compass *~ |
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playing.with.crayons Member
since 2006-01-02
Posts 362Neverland |
I've been reading Macbeth a bit recently and this write reminded me a lot of the theme Shakespeare uses throughout the novel. I really really *heart* this write, you have quite a talent. "Come what come may Time and hour runs through the roughest day" - Shakespeare Love Cheye |
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Rick Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 2903Victoria, Australia |
Wonderful visions here, really enjoyed, thank you for sharing. Sincerely Rick |
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