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aziza
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0 posted 2006-07-09 05:08 PM


Where Do Words Go?

Where do words go when they aren't used
What picture of beauty do they paint
Are they instruments of ecstacy
painting objects of desire
or are they tossed aside forgotten
What kind of story will they tell
Will they make tears rain from her eyes
Whose heart will lurch and beat a bit faster
from the promise of carnal pleasure they bring
Where do words go when they aren't used
do they fall into a tide of empty pages
rippling like a breeze to tease the mind
or are they beckoning to be noticed
waiting for creative control to make them
a story to bring wonder to the imaginations

... aziza ...



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1 posted 2006-07-09 05:29 PM


welcome to Passions!

I enjoyed your first post
and will be looking to read more

divine chaos
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2 posted 2006-07-09 06:04 PM


zi, I'm glad you came and that you're posting, not that I had any doubt that you would *grins*  I like this one, it's new, no?

love you, my friend
Sheli

The artist is nothing without the gift,
but the gift is nothing without work."
- Emile Zola (1840-1902)

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3 posted 2006-07-09 06:15 PM


Welcome to Passions!
Much enjoyed your first post.
I look forward to seeing more of your work.
~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~

For it was not into my ear you whispered
But into my heart..
It was not my lips you kissed
But my soul.

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4 posted 2006-07-09 06:16 PM


Aziza~
WELCOME to PiP !!

I have a theory that the words that pass us by end up in someone else's inkwell to be shared in inspired thought~

I hope you will enjoy your stay within this circle of poetic friendships ... sharing~

*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~
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aziza
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5 posted 2006-07-09 08:39 PM


Thank you all -- I am really enjoying reading the poetry.  DC, dahlink, Frond Princess, it's an older one.

aziza

divine chaos
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6 posted 2006-07-09 09:24 PM


Frond Princess?  I'm the Frond Queen of Chaos, dahlink!  hmmm, I'd never seen that one before .. you've been holding out on me ... have I mentioned that I'm so glad you're here ? :p


Sunshine
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7 posted 2006-07-09 09:57 PM


quote:
Where do words go when they aren't used
....[to]
a story to bring wonder to the imaginations


What a wonderful first poem!

Welcome to Passions!

Please, check your email for a Special Greeting!


" It matters not this distance now  " Excerpt, Yesterday's Love
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KRJ

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8 posted 2006-07-09 10:44 PM




"Where do words go when they aren't used"


They go anywhere they are allowed to stretch their wings to carry meaning that then remains lost to the closed mind.


Welcome to PiP.  

The Lady
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9 posted 2006-07-10 12:26 PM



I really enjoyed this.

Welcome aziza. Got more?

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