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Marge Tindal
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0 posted 2006-07-06 01:06 PM




~*~
~David 'Daddy' Tindal and Delaney Makay Tindal~
*These, these...are the days of remember to be cherished*


~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~
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Martie
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1 posted 2006-07-06 01:11 PM


Marge/sis....You knew I would love this, didn't you now?  I do!!  
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2 posted 2006-07-06 01:21 PM



SweetSis~
I did indeed !!
*Huglets* to you~
~*Marge/Sis*~

~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~
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3 posted 2006-07-06 01:36 PM


Absolutely!!
Great write.

JL

Thomas, because thou hast seen me, thou hast believed:
blessed are they that have not seen, and yet have believed.
~Jesus Christ

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Thank you, JL~

Each moment that a parent spends with a child is etched somewhere in their memories to be thumbed through tenderly in their grown-up days~

This daddy is such a precious daddy~

*Huglets*
~*Marge*~


~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~
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5 posted 2006-07-06 01:56 PM


That was so sweet Marge.  These are the times I had with my own dad that I remember with a smile.  Thank you for that.

Hugs Kimberly


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6 posted 2006-07-06 02:03 PM


Marge,
A delight to see and read.

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7 posted 2006-07-06 02:05 PM


Those are days to treasure for sure, Marge.
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Kimberly~
Memories made each day sure stay with us for a lifetime~

Seymour~
And MY pleasure in having you do so, sir~

SweetSuzieQ~
Thank you hon ... that's exactly right~

*Huglets*
~*Marge*~


~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~
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9 posted 2006-07-06 03:31 PM




Precious poem and picture Marge. Thank you for sharing them.

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10 posted 2006-07-06 03:39 PM



Kate~
Thank you so much ... easy to see why they are my heart~

*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~
Email -       noles1@totcon.com     

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11 posted 2006-07-06 04:01 PM


Marge,
It is the simplicity that gives this piece such power--that and the perfect image it is writ upon. Thank-you very, very much.

A poem's just a poet in a word.

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12 posted 2006-07-06 04:07 PM


Ned~
Thank you ... yes, what seem to be the simple little things in our young lives often keep us grounded in the future years~

I so admire my son's fathering skills with his precious girlies~
Each one receiving that which she needs to nourish her throughout her lifetime~

***By the way, Ned, I have visited your website, intrigued to find the poem with your 'signature line' in it ... I did ... oh my are you blessed with sight ... I felt it within our meeting, but confirming it is a special find to me on this day~
THANK YOU ... now I'm heading back to your web site~

*Huglets*
~*Marge*~


~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~
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13 posted 2006-07-06 04:17 PM


Marge... This moment in time captured with your lens will foreverly be cherished by each of you. Thanks so much for sharing...Paul

~~To share my poems with you is to share my heart with you~~
Paul

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Thank you, Paul~

The lens simply captures the moments of remember as they are being made ... my ~Grandmotherly Mission~ ... to poetically etch them for the all of time~

I KNOW that someday my grandie girlies will read these and know exactly ... exactly ... how much they were loved~

*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~
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15 posted 2006-07-06 04:28 PM


Ah Marge..a precious memory making day
indeed.
These are the days to be placed in our memory banks..
that we may hold on to them forever.

Adorable!
Hugs~Nancy

For it was not into my ear you whispered
But into my heart..
It was not my lips you kissed
But my soul.

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16 posted 2006-07-06 04:39 PM


Oh Marge, you are so right. A woman who had a good relationship with her Dad  is a woman who can have a good marriage.martyjo

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17 posted 2006-07-06 04:50 PM


Dear Marge:

Precious moments and priceless photos!

Love
Betty Lou

Betty Lou Hebert

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what fun days!
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19 posted 2006-07-06 05:33 PM


Two very good looking folks there, Marge!  Very sweet and so very true.  
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20 posted 2006-07-06 05:46 PM


good read
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21 posted 2006-07-07 01:14 PM


Adorable and sooooo true!!!!  

Thank You for sharing!!!!
I enjoy these treasures very much!!!!
HUGS,
Bridgette

"Somewhere, somehow, it should be possible to touch someone and never let go again.  To hold someone, not for a moment but forever." Andre Brink


Marge Tindal
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22 posted 2006-07-07 07:15 PM



More thanks to all of you~

Delaney, Daddy, Mommy and Landry are off to Georgia for a trip that will no doubt include wetting a line~

How fun is this life ?

VERY !

*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~
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