Open Poetry #38 |
a fireworks fantasy |
Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
A caress of warm sunlight seeks the white stretches of me, the covering of the heart space taut, wrapped in a dreamed reality glowing beyond the reach of me as you lean your body over planting moist kisses upon branches in reach, leaving me a pleasured sigh, ‘neath a cumulo nimbussed blue sky splaying itself before my eyes, seeking the joys of touch, nanoseconds of love I pray might last eons and then the fireworks began. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
beautiful |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
"nanoseconds of love I pray might last eons and then the fireworks began." Fireworks make me sad, too, Kacy -- although maybe I interpreted wrong here. ...jo |
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miscellanea Member Elite
since 2004-06-24
Posts 4060OH |
WOW!!! Awesome, Kaci! Sensually awesome! cathy |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Dixie, Jo, Cathy thanks for reading Jo? while I wrote it the fireworks imagery was to have been that of, well, you know, the fun fireworks of love but by time I put this onto the blue screen, the 4th noises started, my mood shifted...so I guess it can be interpreted in both ways |
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JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
"splaying itself before my eyes, seeking the joys of touch, nanoseconds of love I pray might last eons and then the fireworks began." Great one, Midnitesun!! JL Thomas, because thou hast seen me, thou hast believed: |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
JL |
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