navwin » Archives » Open Poetry #38 » a fireworks fantasy
Open Poetry #38
Post A Reply Post New Topic a fireworks fantasy Go to Previous / Newer Topic Back to Topic List Go to Next / Older Topic
Midnitesun
Deputy Moderator 1 Tour
Member Empyrean
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647
Gaia

0 posted 2006-07-04 09:58 PM


A caress of warm sunlight
seeks
the white stretches of me,
the covering of the heart space
taut,
wrapped in a dreamed reality
glowing beyond the reach of me

as you lean your body over
planting moist kisses upon
branches in reach,
leaving me
a pleasured sigh,
‘neath a cumulo nimbussed blue sky
splaying itself before my eyes,
seeking the joys of touch,
nanoseconds of love
I pray might last eons
and then

the fireworks began.


© Copyright 2006 Kathleen Kacy Stafford - All Rights Reserved
passing shadows
Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577
displaced
1 posted 2006-07-04 11:48 PM


beautiful
iliana
Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434
USA
2 posted 2006-07-05 02:36 AM


"nanoseconds of love
I pray might last eons
and then

the fireworks began."

Fireworks make me sad, too, Kacy -- although maybe I interpreted wrong here.   ...jo

miscellanea
Member Elite
since 2004-06-24
Posts 4060
OH
3 posted 2006-07-05 11:20 PM


WOW!!! Awesome, Kaci!  Sensually awesome!

cathy

Midnitesun
Deputy Moderator 1 Tour
Member Empyrean
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647
Gaia
4 posted 2006-07-05 11:26 PM


Dixie, Jo, Cathy
thanks for reading
Jo? while I wrote it the fireworks imagery was to have been that of, well, you know, the fun fireworks of love
but by time I put this onto the blue screen, the 4th noises started, my mood shifted...so I guess it can be interpreted in both ways

JL
Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128
Texas, USA
5 posted 2006-07-06 12:03 PM


"splaying itself before my eyes,
seeking the joys of touch,
nanoseconds of love
I pray might last eons
and then

the fireworks began."

Great one, Midnitesun!!

JL


Thomas, because thou hast seen me, thou hast believed:
blessed are they that have not seen, and yet have believed.
~Jesus Christ

Midnitesun
Deputy Moderator 1 Tour
Member Empyrean
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647
Gaia
6 posted 2006-07-06 12:05 PM


JL
Post A Reply Post New Topic ⇧ top of page ⇧ Go to Previous / Newer Topic Back to Topic List Go to Next / Older Topic
All times are ET (US). All dates are in Year-Month-Day format.
navwin » Archives » Open Poetry #38 » a fireworks fantasy

Passions in Poetry | pipTalk Home Page | Main Poetry Forums | 100 Best Poems

How to Join | Member's Area / Help | Private Library | Search | Contact Us | Login
Discussion | Tech Talk | Archives | Sanctuary