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Spine Grinder
Senior Member

since 2000-10-28

Posts 1127
Standing In Silence...

0 posted 2006-07-03 05:15 PM

I try not to disappoint you.
But I never seem to get that right...
...It's never right....
Every time I see that look in your eyes...
That look of contempt...
It sets my soul -
ABLAZE.

Watch me burn-
Tonight.
Tonight-
Watch my soul-
Bleed the angry red fire
That always seems to consume me
Whenever you're around.

But I welcome the fire.
This fire of misery.
It comes to cleanse my soul.
It burns away all the memories,
That I'm constantly trying to forget.
They haunt my thoughts.

I just wish I could erase them all.....

But all I can do is shed a tear...
And revel in the flames...

"You'll never know how your face has haunted me.My very soul has to bleed this time." ~ Disturbed

"I shut my eyes and hold my cries to myself"~ Taproot

Gentle Spirit
Member Patricius

since 2000-10-09

Posts 13989

1 posted 2006-07-03 05:47 PM

oh parts of this I know all to well Stac.
Good to see you writing it out. Hugs hon.

s1nfully_1nn0c3nt
Senior Member

since 2003-10-26

Posts 1105
Watertown, NY

2 posted 2006-07-03 10:35 PM

So Much To Relate To, Great Write.

I Thought of You Today,
And What We Could've Had
For A Brief Moment I Had You
And Still, I Somehow Knew
I'd Have To Let Go

The Lady
Member Rara Avis

since 2005-12-26

Posts 7634
The Southwest

3 posted 2006-07-03 11:29 PM

Excellent work! Trued by fire.

rosepetals25

Member Elite

since 2000-05-31

Posts 3076
PA

4 posted 2006-07-04 10:24 AM

As the other people said, I can definately relate to this somedays. Nice write

Spine Grinder
Senior Member

since 2000-10-28

Posts 1127
Standing In Silence...

5 posted 2006-07-07 03:28 PM

Thanks everyone, good to know some people understand.

"My soul is adrift in oceans of madness
Repairing the rift that you have created"~ Disturbed

"I shut my eyes and hold my cries to myself"~ Taproot

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

6 posted 2006-07-09 09:38 AM

Very good write, mirroring a situation, to which many surely can relate to ...

Love,
Margherita

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

7 posted 2006-07-09 04:28 PM

As a daughter of the Sun
I truly enjoy this passage,

quote:
But I welcome the fire.
This fire of misery.
It comes to cleanse my soul.

Continue to write it out...
most often,
that is the best revenge.

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

8 posted 2006-07-09 05:46 PM

I guess I didn't leave a comment when I read this earlier...hmmmm

well, just to let you know I did read it and now the second read was even more powerful...I love it!

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