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Open Poetry #38

Your Own Woman

marcel
Senior Member

since 2003-03-02

Posts 660
az, usa

0 posted 2006-06-29 02:28 AM

Your Own Woman

You are not woven from the past
Or loved from the present sins of others;
Instead you live from your own pains,
Caring not for the excuses of my failed ex-lovers…
But you have faith in the resilience of the heart
And your kisses have temporarily induced me to forget
Of past heartbreaks and unhappiness proclaimed,
To realize a truth so clear and cool as ice,
That it warms my thawing trust,
To view within my teary love,
A sight so rare, it sets a mood to the crying sun…

Marcel

skyshine

Member Elite

since 2002-02-07

Posts 3058
Beneath the northern stars

1 posted 2006-06-29 02:30 AM

Wow.....and there's a great message in this one.

sky

I hope someday you get the chance to live like you were dying....
~Tim McGraw

Dragon Mistress
Member

since 2002-08-26

Posts 289
Washington, USA.

2 posted 2006-06-29 05:47 AM

This was wonderful!

~*~I'm a dreamer, with broken dreams, and only words to fall back on~*~

ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-02-22

Posts 9353
Michigan, USA

3 posted 2006-06-29 08:55 AM

You have written spectacular verse; again and again. I so enjoy the workings of your mind and spirit.

The heart in this one... What a wonderful wilderness to explore!

Such sweetness is to be savored.
TD

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

4 posted 2006-06-29 09:17 AM

quote:
To view within my teary love,
A sight so rare, it sets a mood to the crying sun…

Very charming write ... and the hints of wisdom increase its substance.

Love,
Margherita

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