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simon, my cat
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simon, my cat |
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lokiwolf Junior Member
since 2006-06-27
Posts 31 |
Flaming coat, Stealthy hunter Proud master of the house He was too brave Walking upon the monsters path, The man made metal beast It was the one thing He couldn't defeat. [This message has been edited by lokiwolf (06-28-2006 12:13 AM).] |
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lokiwolf Junior Member
since 2006-06-27
Posts 31 |
ya so this is about my cat simon who was hit by a car last month. |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
I am so sorry about Simon! Poor kitty.  here's a cyber hugand a welcome  |
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OwlSA Member Rara Avis
since 2005-11-07
Posts 9347Durban, South Africa |
Oh, I am so sorry. I will tell Flicka, my horse in Heaven, to look out for him. He adored/adores all animals and they all adored/adore him. He had a cat friend who followed him everywhere and slept in his stable. He will look after Simon and show him around heaven. Simon will love his beautiful tribute. Sobs, empathy and hugs - Owl |
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lokiwolf Junior Member
since 2006-06-27
Posts 31 |
thank you guys but like how do you like the poem? |
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jody5 Senior Member
since 2005-12-21
Posts 876California, U.S.A. |
That was such a strong Poem about your Cat. I am sorry for your loss.. I just moved where there are cats and am really learning how special they really are. Huggs Kimberly |
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JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
Sorry to hear about your cat. I’m not a cat lover, not even a cat liker, But I have three grown kids who when they were young Had to have cats for pets. They did. I can understand the attachment. Nice write! JL  Thomas, because thou hast seen me, thou hast believed: |
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OwlSA Member Rara Avis
since 2005-11-07
Posts 9347Durban, South Africa |
I thought the poem was excellent, but was too upset about Simon, to remember to tell you. - Owl |
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Cari07 Junior Member
since 2006-06-28
Posts 33Missouri, US of A |
Oh goodness. I'm not really a cat fan, but if I think about something like that happening to my little dog it breaks my heart. I'm sorry.  |
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dreamdc Member
since 2005-11-11
Posts 54Utah, USA |
I think the poem was perfect. It was just right. Not too much, if you would have said more it would have become something not as sentimental or loving. I am sorry about Simon...me being an animal lover it breaks my heart so much to hear about your sadness...but keep writing, it helps!! Love Dream |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
Hard hitting poem Holly. I liked it very much. So sorry about sweet Simon. |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Very impressive write and it stirs a sad feeling of loss in the reader, while you yourself want to keep under control this emotion. Love, Margherita |
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Serena Junior Member
since 2006-06-25
Posts 47 |
I've always had kitties in my life, living on a farm my parents have many drop offs. All of them are like an extended family to us... A lot of these cats have fallen pray to cars. My heart goes out to your and Simon, I'll never forget when my cat Webo died from the same thing. Best wishes to you <3 |
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froggy Senior Member
since 2003-06-23
Posts 1893Michigan |
A sad but wonderful read. I am a cat lover. Sorry Simon is gone. Until he extends the circle of his compassion to all living things, |
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