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OwlSA
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Durban, South Africa

0 posted 2006-06-27 05:34 PM



I LOVE YOU, MY SYLVAN CHAPEL
13 December 2001

I love you, my sylvan chapel,
with your rain-lit, native leaves
a greenmost clean,
and today’s grey sky pulled down,
blanket-warm, around your branches
and rain-life soft on my bare shoulders,
as, hungrily, with slow caution,
I ease the slender, blackjack root-tips
from your floor
and pile the weeds
triumphantly like spoils of war,
and, my forest, how your wet-earth elixir
infuses my space,
and how my lungs sing wildly
of damp-earth secrets,
as I uncover your eager carpet
of prize Digitaria diversinervus
in its finger elegance and grace,
self-flowing wide
from small beginnings,
as though it knows where it belongs,
as though it knows how welcome it is,
as though it knows how I have nurtured it,
and watch it spread,
like a proud parent …
glowing.

Amongst my children’s precious gifts
from time long gone,
to me and you,
now reaching branches deep into the sky,
I note some humble pioneers in funereal dignity
graciously bowing and returning
at nature’s pace,
in solemn beauty,
into the earth
from whence they came,
to make way for your young, climax forest growth,
and I,
sad for their passing,
pause
and remember their beginnings
in holes, square-fashioned
by my young son’s hands.

My native, garden forest,
a thought arises - tell me what safe-house protects
your avian bursts of colour and of song
when the rain rains long?

Later, in my dry-roomed house,
I shall smile,
deeply,
and slow-blink my eyes
at my cat, who knows,
and feel you, my forest,
alive inside my soul.
And oh my forest, my forest, my African forest,
Namaste, I celebrate the place where we are one.

- Owl

© Copyright 2006 Diana van den Berg - All Rights Reserved
Magnus
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1 posted 2006-06-27 05:39 PM


Awesome, inspiring...humbling...just to name
a few...your reverence to something you
cherish cannot be misread or misunderstood,
it is yours and your are part of it as
well.

OwlSA
Member Rara Avis
since 2005-11-07
Posts 9347
Durban, South Africa
2 posted 2006-06-27 05:44 PM


Magnus, your response is poetry-beautiful and so very heart-warming.  You have truly understood my relationship with my indigenous forest garden.  Thank you.

- Owl

Midnitesun
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Gaia
3 posted 2006-06-27 06:20 PM


quote:
hungrily, with slow caution,
I ease the slender, blackjack root-tips
from your floor
and pile the weeds
triumphantly like spoils of war,
and, my forest, how your wet-earth elixir
infuses my space,
and how my lungs sing wildly
of damp-earth secrets


YIPPEEE!
I love this, am keeping it
wish I could PLANT this poem
and make it grow right here

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113
Canada eh.
4 posted 2006-06-27 06:51 PM


"Later, in my dry-roomed house,
I shall smile,
deeply,
and slow-blink my eyes
at my cat, who knows,
and feel you, my forest,
alive inside my soul.
And oh my forest, my forest, my African forest,
Namaste, I celebrate the place where we are one."

Bravo Diana!!
Oh my this is wonderful...so very beautiful.
Some day I hope to see your forest for myself.
This is going into my library.
Hugs~Nancy

Don't bring me down now,
let me stay here for awhile
You know life's too short,
let me bathe here in your smile.

The Lady
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since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634
The Southwest
5 posted 2006-06-27 10:03 PM




“and today’s grey sky pulled down,
blanket-warm, around your branches
and rain-life soft on my bare shoulders”

Oh Diana. Your words are so exquisite and full of love I could see your forest, smell the moist earth and watch as your Digitaria diversinervus grows and spreads. This is a hymn of devotion.

Sunshine
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Listening to every heart
6 posted 2006-06-27 10:06 PM


Someday, Diana,
I would like to see
this remarkable piece
of magical forest...

how well you tend it...
how beautifully she grows!

Wild and free...

marvelous!


OwlSA
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since 2005-11-07
Posts 9347
Durban, South Africa
7 posted 2006-06-28 01:29 AM


Oh my, oh my, oh my!  What beautiful, beautiful responses from so many people who love and understand the soul of my forest!  Nancy and Karilea, does that mean you may one day visit South Africa?  That would be so wonderful!

Thank you, Kacy.  Giggles at planting the poem/forest over there!

Thank you, Nancy (from Tigger, my cat, too!) for feeling the ambiance of my forest.

Thank you, Kate for being right here with me in my forest.  And smiles because of our email conversations about Digitaria diversinervus.  I have actually taken photo's of it so you can tell me the difference between your Digitaria species and mine.  I will send at least one of them some time, but will have to dig a moment out of somewhere to do so, but it will be reasonably soon.  I also have photo's of my forest, and will send some to you and Bary, Kacy, Nancy and Karilea and anyone else who would really like to see it.  I probably won't be able to afford to send more than one at a time, though.  

Thank you all for loving my indigenous forest.  It is small, but oh, so special to me.

- Owl

OwlSA
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since 2005-11-07
Posts 9347
Durban, South Africa
8 posted 2006-06-28 01:33 AM


Oops!  Sorry Barry.  That was a typing error, spelling your name with one r in my last response.  I can't edit it now, because I can't get to my response directly yet.  I can only see it in the Print version.  

- Owl

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