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Gentle Spirit
Member Patricius

since 2000-10-09

Posts 13989

0 posted 2006-06-26 04:55 PM

You reach into your heart
taking me to those places
you had buried so deep
inside
that you had forgotten
they ever existed...
Together we walk
hand in hand
along the edges
of your dreams...
Your eyes show
the soul of a spirit
that could not remember
how to fly,
and all I could do
was take your hand
and through tears of love
whisper amidst the sounds
of silence....

I am here~

I could feel the flicker
of your flame
reaching,
reaching for the sky
that it might again
burn with the passion
for life that it once held...
as tears fell....
falling from eyes of blue
as you took me
to your hidden heart places,
and I...
I with all my love for you
could only whisper...

I am here~

{rp}

seek the flame within yourself
and let your soul be cleansed by
the fire of love. Axel Ekenstierna

Magnus

Member Laureate

since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

1 posted 2006-06-26 05:52 PM

Most touching, so soft and delicate...
The love is so obvious...nothing can
take it away.

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

2 posted 2006-06-26 07:00 PM

"I am here" are wonderful words that bring peace.

I love the delicacy of this beautifully romantic poem, dear Donna.

Love,
Margherita

iliana
Member Patricius

since 2003-12-05

Posts 13434
USA

3 posted 2006-06-26 07:37 PM

This is such a sweet and very sensitive poem. Donna, it comes straight from your heart, I can tell. *hugs*....jo

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

4 posted 2006-06-26 07:40 PM

"to your hidden heart places,
and I...
I with all my love for you
could only whisper...

I am here~"

Sometimes Donna those are the only words you need whisper.
Lovely, serene and delicate.
Love ya lady~

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
dancing with you in the summer rain ~

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

5 posted 2006-06-27 04:36 AM

beautifully done

I can relate

SmartChick
Member Rara Avis

since 2001-09-23

Posts 7081
On A Journey To The Unknown

6 posted 2006-06-27 07:20 AM

It is always good to have someone, who will always be there.

LeeJ
Member Patricius

since 2003-06-19

Posts 13296

7 posted 2006-06-27 11:03 AM

You reach into your heart
taking me to those places
you had buried so deep
inside
that you had forgotten
they ever existed...

this was so lovely, so like love is supposed to be...

an awakening, growth, reward...great spiritual experience...

JL
Member Ascendant

since 2004-04-01

Posts 6128
Texas, USA

8 posted 2006-06-27 12:26 PM

"I with all my love for you
could only whisper...

I am here~"

Beautiful.

JL

Thomas, because thou hast seen me, thou hast believed:
blessed are they that have not seen, and yet have believed.
~Jesus Christ

FiercestCalm
Junior Member

since 2006-06-24

Posts 31
michigan

9 posted 2006-06-27 12:30 PM

this is real love. beautiful!

nedj
Member

since 2006-06-23

Posts 87
Oregon USA

10 posted 2006-06-27 12:38 PM

They say the saddest words are "might have been," but I wonder if in truth they are, "was and is no more." And if so, then the gladdest might be, "...but may be again." A lovely thought well expressed. Thanks.

A poem's just a poet in a word.

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