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howardtsu
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since 2006-01-29

Posts 678

0 posted 2006-06-25 02:10 PM

                  if i'm light enough to lift your heart

is it possible that i'm right enough to repair the rift keeping us apart

the forsight of how rough it is to live without your art

has taught me how to write as if one or two whiffs of your "Secret" perfume can start

                                     our eternity

                                                              love,

                                                              howard

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

1 posted 2006-06-25 02:51 PM

A little gem, I would say!

Love,
Margherita

Midnitesun

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since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

2 posted 2006-06-25 05:24 PM

sense and scents

good luck

for another grin write

Poetic Concept
Member

since 2006-06-25

Posts 66
God's Fingerprint

3 posted 2006-06-25 05:38 PM

if i'm light enough to lift your heart

is it possible that i'm right enough to repair the rift keeping us apart

the forsight of how rough it is to live without your art

has taught me how to write as if one or two whiffs of your "Secret" perfume can start

our eternity

I didnt really understand the first line "i'm light enough to lift your heart", literally that makes no sense but metaphorically I think u have touched on something that I have viewed as profound..."light" can be described in so many ways, but I think that light is used not in weight but as a guiding star, like u r asking her (assumption) am I right for u am I perfect for u...I dont really know how to express my true feelings for that line through words...but if I am totally off tell me...and I will still keep my abstract view for that is what makes good poets,n the fact that they can purposley produce varying opinions...good luck...elevation is the key

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"How vain it is to sit down and write when u have not stood up to live"
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howardtsu
Senior Member

since 2006-01-29

Posts 678

4 posted 2006-06-26 12:43 PM

thanks margherita

thanks midnitesun

thanks poetic concept

i'm using "light" in terms of 'am i light-hearted enought to lift your heart or spirits"

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