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HopeS
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0 posted 2006-06-21 01:54 PM



What Happened To You

Would it be the conclusion
Being the end for me
Writing my final chapter
The last thing you see

Perhaps this is the closure
Ending with my tears
These emotional pages
Have taken nine years

Having sought continuation
It was what I yearned
Was the ending in sight  
You have not returned

Maybe you will never notice
If I vanished from view
Since it remains unclear
What happened to you

Hope ©2006

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LeeJ
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1 posted 2006-06-21 02:12 PM




well I would notice, so poleeeeze don't go anywhere...ok?  

this was sad, poignant...and caused me great alarm...
what would we do, if Hope vanished from the blue pages?

wonderful write!!!

HopeS
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2 posted 2006-06-21 02:15 PM


You are so sweet Lee , thanks for your kind thoughts

Hope

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3 posted 2006-06-21 02:17 PM


Sometimes we never get the closure....so sad.....

sky

I hope someday you get the chance to live like you were dying....
~Tim McGraw

HopeS
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4 posted 2006-06-21 02:23 PM


Thank you Sky , yes you are right , their silence explains nothing

Hope

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5 posted 2006-06-21 04:46 PM


I know
Enchantress
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6 posted 2006-06-21 04:48 PM


Oh dear, this one just aches Hope.
Heart hugs~Nancy

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
dancing with you in the summer rain ~

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