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Open Poetry #38

What You Want...

s1nfully_1nn0c3nt
Senior Member

since 2003-10-26

Posts 1105
Watertown, NY

0 posted 2006-06-20 08:56 PM

You want it don’t you?
All that I’ve got
But could you handle it?
The pain inside
The guilt that I hide
And all that is to come
Could you look yourself in the mirror?
Time after time
With the knowledge Of what you’ve done
Lingering in mind
You want it don’t you?
All that I’ve got
You can have it
For it’s not as it seems
Just heed my advice
It’s not easy being me.

I Thought of You Today,
And What We Could've Had
For A Brief Moment I Had You
And Still, I Somehow Knew
I'd Have To Let Go

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

1 posted 2006-06-20 09:00 PM

raw and honest
I like it

SarBear
Member

since 2003-06-05

Posts 205
Massachusetts

2 posted 2006-06-21 11:34 PM

I like this a lot. Your emotions really come through and it is very honest.

Kristabell
Senior Member

since 2003-11-29

Posts 678
Portland, OR

3 posted 2006-06-21 11:36 PM

Ouch... I took it when given a chance. Nice write.

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