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Asterisk
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since 2006-06-20

Posts 2

0 posted 2006-06-20 03:16 PM

Hi, I'm new here, I wanted to post just one poem as I don't want to over do it on the first post. I have never shared anyone my writeings so I dont't know if I'm any good, please tell me you thoughts. It's pretty short so I don't know if I would say it's finished.

Lonely wonderer has strayed the path once clear
As he waches his life pass before him
Defeated and kept company with his sorrows
Time was the thef that robbed his passion
Love a visitor that passed in dreams

Asterisk
New Member

since 2006-06-20

Posts 2

1 posted 2006-06-20 03:19 PM

oh I didn't know I had to insert HTML line breaks to space my text, I can't even find out were to edit my posts. Sorry that it's jumbled together like that. Never mind I found it.

Marge Tindal

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since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

2 posted 2006-06-20 03:42 PM

***Asterisk***~
WELCOME to PiP .. a nice entry you've made~

Practice makes for perfection ... you'll figure out all the ins and outs of PiP in no time flat !

*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~
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Earth Angel
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since 2002-08-27

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Realms of Light

3 posted 2006-06-20 04:10 PM

Hi, *

Welcome to pipTalk!

"Time was the thef that robbed his passion
Love a visitor that passed in dreams"

~ How poetic!

May love be your constant companion and not just be passing by in your dreams.