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HopeS
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0 posted 2006-01-11 09:10 AM




Coming To The Realisation

So what was your reasons
You had for choosing me
Could it be you realised
My heart's vulnerability

Had you realised my heart
Could therefore be reliable
While penetrating deeply
On the soft and pliable

Was I easy to see through
Way back nine years ago
By taking me for granted
Had it boosted your ego

Still I had no reason to hide
I kept pride in my honesty
Coming to the realisation
You were only using me

Since you distance yourself
I shall continue on with life
As you listen to the voice
Of the one you call wife


Hope ©2006

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Member Patricius
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1 posted 2006-01-11 09:23 AM


Was I easy to see through
Way back nine years ago
By taking me for granted
Had it boosted your ego


That's a long time - nine years.
I can relate to the pain in this - and can tell you first hand - time waits for no one - be grateful that you are without the one who caused you heartache such as this.
hugs, Chris

HopeS
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2 posted 2006-01-11 09:29 AM


Thank you Chris , it was someone I thought was a close friend for 9 years , obviously they turned out not to be , it helps pouring the hurt into my poems

Hugs Hope

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3 posted 2006-01-11 01:08 PM


its a hard tumble to take, i know..
feel good please

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