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Open Poetry #37

hold on

poetry_queen
Member

since 2006-02-02

Posts 94
england,

0 posted 2006-02-08 04:44 PM

Tears in your eyes,
blinking away mistakes
you've made.
Droplets falling from your cheeks.
The memory of past.
A tissue wipes away the fears
of knowing you're not there
To help her.
She's holding on
to nothingness :
grasping for air - but falling.
She can't hold on.
Too far gone.
You know it's over now,
but the pain's still there ;
more than ever.
You left her : but she can't
hold on
not on her own.
She dares not to scream
and wake her surroundings
Everywhere reflections of memory -
and letting go.
She didn't hold on.

JL
Member Ascendant

since 2004-04-01

Posts 6128
Texas, USA

1 posted 2006-02-08 05:47 PM

"She dares not to scream
and wake her surroundings
Everywhere reflections of memory -"

Very nice write.
Enjoyed.

JL

Bagger Vance
Member

since 2006-02-01

Posts 108
Aotearoa

2 posted 2006-02-09 03:00 PM

the pain.......
aye... felt it he did

White Gold Wielder

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