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Midnight In The Book Of Ages
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Midnight In The Book Of Ages |
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Bagger Vance Member
since 2006-02-01
Posts 108Aotearoa |
we were want to write our summer wine in the book of ages pages a labyrinth of imbedded fragile words mated there velum in vora a night city with a beat of camisole movements i would laugh so often for you branded me a thief impenitent told me I not only had the audacity to steal your heart but helped myself as well behind your eyes the river so placid, calm and beguiling aching to be stirred would we not put our ripple ribbons from here to neverending? coaxing an audience with the lady if only to solve this riddle? i tell you these fingers are bruited to be kindling of kind kindred to run their rampant across your phoenix in the night and eagle of the day cushioned by the sky in your spread soar and so as the umbrage of each pages inked inclines to our recline we find forty voices massaging our eye to eye in orotund pronouncements brama sole, umbria and the seven houses hold court in dreams stilled my blood is loquacious ma reine from the fever of your laughter that regales my animal hackles subdue with claws sheathed in homage come, the spirit river calls as it flows to eden where keys bloom night glides over my thoughts as they sound the scale in contemplation my hands caressed those mated words with profound longing prophesighing bless your heart in your sleeveless day sweetheart till then………………… BV © Copyright 10.2005 White Gold Wielder |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
would laugh so often for you branded me a thief impenitent told me I not only had the audacity to steal your heart but helped myself as well behind your eyes just one of your thoughts that I enjoyed~~ M |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
I like the voice of this, Sir... it is deep and warm, and very close to the ear. . |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
BV, your rich and sultry use of impassioned words has ma reine d'esprit flowing! ...'Til then! ~ indeed!   Linda |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
"my blood is loquacious ma reine from the fever of your laughter that regales my animal hackles subdue with claws sheathed in homage come, the spirit river calls as it flows to eden where keys bloom night glides over my thoughts as they sound the scale in contemplation my hands caressed those mated words with profound longing prophesighing bless your heart in your sleeveless day sweetheart till then…………………" Oooh myyy....*Sigh*... Do it again, please Sir. Hugs~Nancy In the midst of winter, |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
BV....Nice! As smooth as melted chocolate is yummy. |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Enjoyed...James |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Yummy and beautiful! |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
Sooooo romantic...Where DO you get it? |
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Bagger Vance Member
since 2006-02-01
Posts 108Aotearoa |
Thank you everyone for your kind words.. it's good to see y'all drop by. . . Blessed be White Gold Wielder |
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A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart |
Passionate~ ~ARH  |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
I love to see work that is so full of passion, zest, and zeal! I truly am enjoying your words on these blue pages, sir..  seek the flame within yourself |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
ahem liking the sizzle of this |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Interesting fare for the mind, enjoyed the read. |
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