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Open Poetry #37
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exhale
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since 2003-06-13
Posts 646
Alberta,Canada
0 posted 2006-02-07 08:37 PM

There's electricity in the air
clinging to the tables and chairs
to arms and fingers
lightning, ready and waiting
for skin to skin
word to word
close contact
the air between us
charged and waiting
to connect us

break the chain
reach out into the air
and wait for the explosion
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Martie
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1 posted 2006-02-07 11:19 PM

exhale....I've felt that way before...it's wonderful how you expressed it!  
JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16
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Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
2 posted 2006-02-07 11:27 PM

Nice...James
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