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Seymour Tabin
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0 posted 2006-02-07 07:47 AM


Mountain View Haiku

Look from a mountain
Are the clouds above or below?
I would like to know


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Sunshine
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1 posted 2006-02-07 08:47 AM



Happy Birthday, Sy.




Earth Angel
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2 posted 2006-02-07 08:50 AM


Good morning, Mr. T.! Birthday Card

In the case of the mountain-top from which you reign, the clouds are definitely below!

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EA

LeeJ
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3 posted 2006-02-07 09:19 AM


Greetings Morning Man

I believe both...cuz being man, we've still got things to learn...

hugs to ya, have a very special day

Enchantress
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4 posted 2006-02-07 10:19 AM


I don't know Sy...
guess it depends on how high one flys.

Happy Happy Birthday!!!
~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~

In the midst of winter,
I found there lives within me..
An invincible summer.

suthern
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5 posted 2006-02-07 10:41 AM


Either way... you soar, my friend. *S*

HAPPY, HAPPY BIRTHDAY!!!!

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6 posted 2006-02-07 10:52 AM


i guess it depends if your walking on cloud or flying above.   well it sounded good when it popped into my head.  lived in hawaii for a while, clouds do hang low and high there.

hope your walking above the clouds today and   again my poet friend,HAPPY  BIRTHDAY
    
         

My spirit will rise
above the sea~
There will be no drowning
of my soul or me~

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7 posted 2006-02-07 10:59 AM


Happy Birthday Seymour!! I hope that you have the happiest
birthday ever. May all your wishes become realities.
I love this haiku you've written!! Very good!!
Hugs,
Ethel


~Excitement Of A Special Day~

There's excitement in the air
Can you feel it everywhere
It is an extra special day
And I have come here to say

A Happy Birthday to you
May all your wishes come true
May smiles be upon your face
As your blessings you embrace

I wish to you now all this
As Happy Birthday to you I wish
And may you have many more years
Filled with joy, laughter, and cheers

© Copyright 2005 Ethel GG Kent
Seymour Tabin
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8 posted 2006-02-07 11:41 AM


With all of you wishing me so well, how can I miss. to all.
Janet Marie
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9 posted 2006-02-07 11:57 AM


me thinks that both the mountains and clouds
are grateful for the view of you.  

Happy B-day Sybabers!!

did Randy make his wish? lol


Martie
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10 posted 2006-02-07 12:01 PM


Hi Sy!!  Happy Birthday!!  I have known clouds to be above and below, depending on the mountain,....also within.  
scorpio
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11 posted 2006-02-07 12:05 PM


Hope your view is clear and beautiful Sy.  Happy Birthday!!

believe in what your heart feels...

iliana
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12 posted 2006-02-07 12:05 PM


Happy, happy birthday, Sy!  Sounds like you are cloud walking this morning...lol!   .......jo
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13 posted 2006-02-07 12:39 PM




Silly you...they are both above and below me

Happy Birthday Symaker!

The Lady
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14 posted 2006-02-07 04:48 PM





"Are the clouds above or below?"

They are either way you like them... it's your birthday! Happy birthday!!


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15 posted 2006-02-07 05:12 PM


nice read
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