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The Magic Within
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The Magic Within |
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jane_kiedis Junior Member
since 2006-02-04
Posts 38Philippines |
 in the land of faeries enchantment dwells flickering fluttering sounds of winglets trees and flowers lastingly blooms liquid crystal flows and glistens the sun here shines the brightest and night is always at its finest a land where no one had foreseen but does exists in purest will see to believe? or believe to see? [This message has been edited by jane_kiedis (02-05-2006 08:09 AM).] |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
 D E L I G H T F U L ! ! I B E L I E V E! ~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~  |
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RedStoneEB Senior Member
since 2003-06-08
Posts 772uk |
When did you become so good at writing poetry this is beyond a beginner piece |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
 I Believe! |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
Enchanting Jane! I believe! |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
I also believe....how could one not?  |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
Yessssss, I believe too. and enjoyed the magic within very much  Charisma |
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jane_kiedis Junior Member
since 2006-02-04
Posts 38Philippines |
awww... im soo flattered to all of ur responses!!!  felt real good knowing that u guys enjoyed it  i love faeries, i actually have 3 porcelein fairy dolls here in my room... i was starin at them, and suddenly i had this thought about "what is it like to be in their world?" ...and so this poem was the result of that particular moment...   Anyway, here in my country, The Land of the Faeries is called "Encantadia" and that's what im supposed to put in as the poem's title, but i felt that it'll be best to use "The Magic Within" because im expressing it more as a kind of world thats visible depending on the desires of one's heart. B I G T H A N K S for appreciating my work...  *hugs all of u* ------------> Jane psychic spies from China tries to steal your mind's elation |
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