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Fallen Petals
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Fallen Petals |
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CastleGuard Senior Member
since 2003-04-30
Posts 760Alberta, Canada |
She felt red rose’s petals fall — So silent, not a single sigh — And in her soul a doleful call, A crystal stain upon her eye. Oh, why the tear - he’d cold declare - For it is not your love to mourn; So do not weep in false despair And others’ foreign love forlorn. Oh, but Lord, just how to tell — Those petals broken off her heart And drifted down an endless well — Now she and him forever part. CG |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
sometimes that is "how it goes" lovely the way you can make something sad so beautiful M |
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Bagger Vance Member
since 2006-02-01
Posts 108Aotearoa |
so much he feels from this sighs White Gold Wielder |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
So sad ~ but sweetly told...   EA |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
Heartbreaking. You write so well. |
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Rainbowdust Member
since 2002-12-05
Posts 320Sydney, Australia |
Lovin' your work CG. The soul would have no rainbows, had the eyes no tears. |
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A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart |
You must have been predicting my future with this poem....it is so sad, but I am going to see that moonlight you were speaking of earlier~  I love the title~ ~ARH  |
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