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icebox
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in the shadows

0 posted 2006-02-02 11:32 PM





I-Rak
we’re back;
don’t want no rag head A-Tak.
Got to choose
missiles to cruise,
what if we’re wrong
think we’re wrong?
You don’t belong
in the momentary ‘murika of freedom.
What if we’re right?
Hang on tight,
was that Hans Blix?
Or just the media’s tricks of opportunities?
Hang on to your extremities,
some go past
some go fast;
Jumpin’ Cluster Bomb Flash
it’s a gas
it’s a gas.
See this cool gun my momma sent?
I get to kill for free!
With extra pay she pay the rent,
while we’re over here making our own gear;
hardly got time to collect an ear
and we always gotta hide the beer.
Why are we dying anyway?
Well they are too,
always so much more to do;
need more armor on the Hummer though.
Just can’t say when we’ll be done
‘cause nobody ever seems to know;
we’re number one!
We’re number one
as long as we  believe,
nothing to deceive
nothing left to grieve.

©2006 by icebox

© Copyright 2006 icebox - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2006-02-02 11:38 PM


Whoa!  A rapping Ice?  Great message, and you had this ole foot just a tappin too.
iliana
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2 posted 2006-02-02 11:49 PM


I-ran
Same fun.
Different day,
Same gun.

Whoa is us, I fear.  Keep tellin' it like it is, Mr. C.  

Martie
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3 posted 2006-02-03 12:48 PM


icebox

This was great!!  

Katerie
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4 posted 2006-02-03 05:36 AM


Wow- seems like something new for you.  Like someone else said, it's not "I-rak" I'm afraid of, it's "'murika.

Like a ship blown from it's mooringby a wind off the sea- I have been changed for good.

Susan Caldwell
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5 posted 2006-02-03 08:14 AM




have a brother(in-law) over there..

I have no answers...

but Icy? thanks.

"too bad ignorance isn't painful"
~Unknown~

Bagger Vance
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6 posted 2006-02-05 10:35 AM


smiles..........

aye
your rhythmic pen rocks

White Gold Wielder

The Lady
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7 posted 2006-02-05 05:24 PM



You go now! Great job!

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8 posted 2006-02-06 12:07 PM


a rap for i rak   lol  this was very good

My spirit will rise
above the sea~
There will be no drowning
of my soul or me~

littlewing
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9 posted 2006-02-06 10:15 PM


Zack de la Rocha would sing this . . .
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