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ecrivan Member Elite
since 2001-12-10
Posts 3923my own state 
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Empty cup caught drops glass flasks collected some amassed in gutters dripping down copper folds but never a wine cup The goblet leans for liquor but sewers are skewered for heaven's fall enumerable sky drops that coalesce flow thought to be alive, grouped in channels rivulets wavy lines in sandy mud receding into pockets spaces among the grains The goblet empties its red harvest then renewed its vineyard fluid second to heaven's fall thought alive would wave again among grains and drenched souls. |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Martin, I really enjoyed reading this. Refreshing! ......jo |
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Bagger Vance Member
since 2006-02-01
Posts 108Aotearoa |
suffice it to say i love the rain  White Gold Wielder |
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ecrivan Member Elite
since 2001-12-10
Posts 3923my own state |
just experimenting with a 'new' approach to writing here and I'm beginning to like it myself too  |
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