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Bagger Vance Member
since 2006-02-01
Posts 108Aotearoa |
Your lips are soft stories with many boulevards and lanes for dreamsleep thighwings. Lingerie slick cinnamon in my cup. Hands quiver on latch unrusted, enticed, supped and touched with island shadows in the light of day. We are grace We are nasty We are wet cloth of scented secrets BV © Copyright 1.2006 White Gold Wielder |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Bagger Vance "with island shadows in the light of day." I enjoyed the dichotomy of some of the words you used in this poem, like "grace" and "nasty". It works!! Welcome to Passions..I look forward to reading more of your poetry. |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
BV, welcome to the place of pen. cohiba is a favorite set of rings..and now the gurkha has weilded some flavors too. enjoyed the pen |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
BVance~ I like the word-steps of your entry into our poetic circle~ I see from your websites that you hail from New Zealand ... we graciously welcome you and look forward to more posting~ You will enjoy being here to share with some very talented poets~ WELCOME~ *Huglets*  ~*Marge*~ ~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~ |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
WELCOME TO PASSIONS BV! Oh my how I enjoyed this first post! I am so much looking forward to more of your work. Please check your email for a special Passions greeting. ~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~ In the midst of winter, |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
"We are wet cloth of scented secrets" Um hmmmm... I like this poem. |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Welcome and I too went surfing your poetry elsewhere and truly enjoyed what I read. It is refreshing to have a new poet with such a wonderfully gifted view of life on deck. I do hope you will share more with the members here, and this was "sweet!" By the way Bagger Vance was my favorite Redford movie.  |
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D.Lester Young Senior Member
since 2001-12-08
Posts 1219Austin, Tx |
Very nice poetic voice, enjoyed. |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Welcome, BV. You've gifted us with some nice visual imagery, so I'll be seeking more. |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Oh, we are going to enjoy your words... and the very slippery slide of their sounds.... Welcome to Passions! You're going to enjoy the ride. " It matters not this distance now " Excerpt, Yesterday's Love |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Welcome to Passions! Quite a steamy write! |
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Bagger Vance Member
since 2006-02-01
Posts 108Aotearoa |
MARTIE it's an honor to be here friend, thank you for your kind words DS aye.. tis the house of pen indeed, greetings and much thanks dark brother MT grins.. thank you for the warm welcome i look forward to knowing you all ENCHANTRESS much humbled and grateful for the splendiferous welcome friend poetess..blessings to your house TL he's warmed that you liked MYSTERIA you honor me with your gracious words.. am happy it delighted you so with what you unearthed... it would seem we both share the same respect for the 'ol caddy'... peace to you friend poet DLY thank you friend Lester for your eyes here MIDNITESUN always the sum of strive poet friend.. humbled he is for your gracious sentiments SUNSHINE to be complimented from one in such an office is an honor indeed.. thank you muchly friend poet for your eyes on the slide of his slip ILIANA grins... you are too kind friend poetess.. grateful he is for your kind sentiments.. blessings to you White Gold Wielder |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Welcome aboard these piptalk pages of blue. It is a family of kindred poetic spirits. This was a delicious piece with which to make your debut! I was especially intriqued by your opening stanza ~ "Your lips are soft stories with many boulevards and lanes for dreamsleep thighwings." ~ I found myself puckering up with those sumptuous words!  Warm, welcoming hug, Earth Angel  |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
We are grace We are nasty Many welcomes, BV!!! *S* I enjoyed this very much and look forward to reading more of your work! *S* |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Bagger Vance This makes me think of a Haiku I once wrote The hands of my clock Are butterflies and flowers What time do you have |
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Bagger Vance Member
since 2006-02-01
Posts 108Aotearoa |
EA puckering did you say? dayummm... ahem.. thank you poetess friend for your smile here SUTHERN and merry meet to you friend poet. . . an honor to be among such august company ST ah.. it does? well good on ya mate.. and thanks back he does for the slice of your pen too.. blessed be White Gold Wielder |
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CastleGuard Senior Member
since 2003-04-30
Posts 760Alberta, Canada |
Much enjoyed, and welcome to PIP, Bagger Vance. Looking forward to reading your work. CG |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
What a smooth scribe of sensuality BV, welcome to Passions. I will be looking forward to reading more from your quill! I hope you enjoy your time here, and the friends you will come to know here at Pip. seek the flame within yourself |
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oakgrove Junior Member
since 2006-02-01
Posts 12 |
i wasnt sure about "sin tree" though it was different and interesting to read this though was gorgeous thank you |
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Edward Grim Senior Member
since 2005-12-18
Posts 1154Greenville, South Carolina |
Nicely done Bagger. I look forward to reading more of your work. Cheers - Ed Momma says, "Life... is like a box full of chocolates, you never know when you're gonna get one with a nut in it". |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Enjoyed...James |
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Goldenrose Member Elite
since 2003-05-30
Posts 3665 |
Enjoyed these words...i echo sunshines welcome...welcome to pip..you will fit in here just fine... Goldenrose. Desire for nothing except desirelessness,hope for nothing except to rise above all hopes, want nothing and you will have everything.avatar Meher Baba. |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
Sorry I have been remiss in welcoming you!! Welcome, welcome, welcome!!! I enjoyed and will be looking for more!!! "too bad ignorance isn't painful" |
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Bagger Vance Member
since 2006-02-01
Posts 108Aotearoa |
thank you so much for your kind words my friends... aye.. much appreciashun indeed White Gold Wielder |
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