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Third and last - development on gentle

Bodger
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since 2005-06-12

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Tolerance for a short time

0 posted 2006-01-31 06:13 PM

As a wind gently slowing twisting you drew across my hand softly ruffling hairs on the back of my hand as you passed in a breath of wind touching a breath as you never turned leaving vapours entire in a fragment of philosphy woven

On a rainbow colours transformed a need to not understand but to consider so much magic

Dave

Bagger Vance
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since 2006-02-01

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Aotearoa

1 posted 2006-02-02 12:21 PM

"As a wind gently slowing twisting you drew across my hand......"

and so this lingering simplicity of thoughts deep take flight.. aye, he paused to read and read again

praises to the feel of your pen friend poet

Martie

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since 1999-09-21

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California

2 posted 2006-02-02 06:31 PM

Dave....beautiful flow to this...like magic!

jinx26
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since 2005-12-12

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Jersey

3 posted 2006-02-02 06:34 PM

I love to read your words they always keep me thinking jinx

The Lady
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since 2005-12-26

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The Southwest

4 posted 2006-02-02 11:15 PM

Lovely.

Bodger
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since 2005-06-12

Posts 1260
Tolerance for a short time

5 posted 2006-02-03 06:45 PM

For anyone getting my comments - 2 1/2 hour drive and I haven't eaten yet but 23.40 in the UK and I am saying this because I am watching my spelling disintegrete or grate, or whatever

Dave

I know I can edit these words but whatever if it is there (not looking for compliments) means I read it and want to write some more but fresh with only the idea in my mind

Your words and appreciation are always valued - otherwise it is a dark hole

Thanks to everyone who mails

I am getting organised away and will reply.

Dave

MGROVES

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since 2004-02-01

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california

6 posted 2006-02-04 04:45 AM

your words are always interesting

and a pleasure to read~

My spirit will rise
above the sea~
There will be no drowning
of my soul or me~

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