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Goldenrose
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0 posted 2006-01-31 09:02 AM


In the shock
of chill winter
air,breathless, the
second slowed to
crawling time lapse.
Your mind seeing
a personal future
scudding by like
racing clouds, cerulean.
Realise the depth
of love, the
tender embrace, the
highest praise you
are held in,
until the last
dawning day passes.

Desire for nothing except desirelessness,hope for nothing except to rise above all hopes, want nothing and you will have everything.avatar Meher Baba.

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Florida's Foreverly Shores
1 posted 2006-01-31 09:53 AM


GoldenRose~
This is simply a lovely, lovely pen pour~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~
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Earth Angel
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Realms of Light
2 posted 2006-01-31 10:03 AM


You write so tenderly of the depths of love, Dear Rose of Gold.


Linda

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The Southwest
3 posted 2006-01-31 02:57 PM




Delightful work!



Bagger Vance
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Aotearoa
4 posted 2006-02-02 12:04 PM


aye

tenderness felt indeed

RedStoneEB
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5 posted 2006-02-03 06:28 AM


Love is a powerful emotion to write about and you write it well
A Romantic Heart
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Forever In Your Heart
6 posted 2006-02-03 07:20 AM


Until your last breath~how much more powerful can love be than that?

~ARH

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