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Open Poetry #37

herald of a sandstone's scarlet

Dark Stranger
Member Patricius

since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

0 posted 2006-01-31 07:45 AM

they were the warriors under stones
I heard the sand of their armor
as they struggled to become clay

and the potter smiled her eyes
and pried her hands into their water
reaching for the souls she could fashion

into goblets of crystalline for her wine
and saucers of vapor to hide her jewels
and a vase diaphanous to stem her black roses

her breasts are heavy now in their freedom
she plays them in shadow dances for the sun
lest he hurry to his night place covenant

without glassing her lover's complexions

_____________
daark

[This message has been edited by Dark Stranger (01-31-2006 09:34 AM).]

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

1 posted 2006-01-31 08:27 AM

bend the sounds

~*~

lovely language, this...

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

2 posted 2006-01-31 09:59 AM

Dark~

'the potter smiled her eyes
and pried her hands into their water
reaching for the souls she could fashion'

Oh my ... the word-potter has sculpted another beauty~

This potter's wheel product likes me VERY MUCH~

Tuesday morning *HUGLETS*
~*Marge*~

~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~
Email - noles1@totcon.com

Martie

Moderator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-09-21

Posts 28049
California

3 posted 2006-01-31 10:38 AM

DS

I love sand, and thanks to you I see all that it is, not just for my barefeet on beach days, but for much more.

The Lady
Member Rara Avis

since 2005-12-26

Posts 7634
The Southwest

4 posted 2006-01-31 02:52 PM

Impressive work.

Bagger Vance
Member

since 2006-02-01

Posts 108
Aotearoa

5 posted 2006-02-02 12:04 PM

ah....
wot a feast to behold once more...

MGROVES

Member Elite

since 2004-02-01

Posts 3802
california

6 posted 2006-02-04 05:01 AM

always enjoy whispers from the dark

My spirit will rise
above the sea~
There will be no drowning
of my soul or me~

RedStoneEB
Senior Member

since 2003-06-08

Posts 772
uk

7 posted 2006-02-04 05:30 AM

Nice thoughts good poem

The Lady
Member Rara Avis

since 2005-12-26

Posts 7634
The Southwest

8 posted 2006-02-05 01:11 AM

You know Stranger, there's something about your work I can't name but I love it.

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