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JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

0 posted 2006-01-30 11:22 PM

Death When You Want It

Oh yes, I've lost some I've cared for.
The number more than my heart wants to say.
When those connections were severed, it was
as if a swift sword had cut them all away.
Thats when you understand the meaning,
thats when your pain learns to say,
"Death never comes when you want it,
death always comes on a bad day."

JamesLee
January28
2006

MGROVES

Member Elite

since 2004-02-01

Posts 3802
california

1 posted 2006-01-30 11:31 PM

so true

My spirit will rise
above the sea~
There will be no drowning
of my soul or me~

The Lady
Member Rara Avis

since 2005-12-26

Posts 7634
The Southwest

2 posted 2006-01-30 11:43 PM

Oh my. This one is so touching.

iliana
Member Patricius

since 2003-12-05

Posts 13434
USA

3 posted 2006-01-30 11:45 PM

*hugs* Yes...it is the way it happens almost always......jo

Dominique-Simone
Senior Member

since 2005-11-12

Posts 643

4 posted 2006-01-30 11:46 PM

"Death never comes when you want it,
death always comes on a bad day."

This is the truest statement.. great job

Bodger
Senior Member

since 2005-06-12

Posts 1260
Tolerance for a short time

5 posted 2006-01-31 06:23 PM

I understand this more than I realised helped by a few months ago then other people's words made sense and you are yourself

Dave

Bagger Vance
Member

since 2006-02-01

Posts 108
Aotearoa

6 posted 2006-02-02 12:23 PM

reads

nods

aye friend poet.. nothing else he says except to say.. 'so true'
death has a lousy sense of timing i reckon

rosepetals25

Member Elite

since 2000-05-31

Posts 3076
PA

7 posted 2006-02-04 07:46 PM

I recently lost a family memeber and this poem says it all. I wish I would have stopped in sooner to see this.

Tara

jane_kiedis
Junior Member

since 2006-02-04

Posts 38
Philippines

8 posted 2006-02-04 08:05 PM

well-expressed thought and feeling in that short poem of urs... very touching

psychic spies from China tries to steal your mind's elation

nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

9 posted 2006-02-04 08:09 PM

Thats when you understand the meaning,
thats when your pain learns to say,
"Death never comes when you want it,
death always comes on a bad day."

so true..a good write, James

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