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ecrivan
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since 2001-12-10
Posts 3923
my own state

0 posted 2006-01-30 10:29 PM


Of the notion
future change is rough
done with conviction

Trouble with company
politics of a keyboard
chat lines enlivened
future gives into past
for a moment
until the axe falls

Only a number of days
somebody else likes you
to pick up the tab
take you on another path
without the trouble

Future change is rough
motion sickness brief
done with conviction
predilection
monitor views command
sucks brains
replace legs
on the notion



[This message has been edited by ecrivan (01-31-2006 08:25 AM).]

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iliana
Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434
USA
1 posted 2006-01-31 12:08 PM


"suck brains
replace legs"

Sad, but I think, true.  There is a reason they call it a corporate jungle.  *hugs*....jo

Dominique-Simone
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since 2005-11-12
Posts 643

2 posted 2006-01-31 12:14 PM


what an interesting write.. I like your creativness
littlewing
Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655
New York
3 posted 2006-01-31 09:25 AM


This is SO odd but I was just having this conversation with Wranx the other day, not even kidding.

You must write more, Martin.

ecrivan
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since 2001-12-10
Posts 3923
my own state
4 posted 2006-02-01 01:30 AM


I try to, but I admit getting caught up on form, style and the rest of the u know what..thanks littlewing


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