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Fee
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0 posted 2006-01-29 08:14 AM



We were not there to protect you,
we did not see at all.
What happened to you was always
done behind a locked door.

Never in a million years
are you to take the blame.
You will never need to think less of yourself
or hang your head in shame.

The night that your Mum phoned me
through tears she did confide.
How was she to help you
your inocence and your pride.

She asked me what to tell you
how to take away your pain,
How to explain what was done
was to be some one elses shame.

To remind you in the darkness
that there will always be a light.
To be the ones to hold you
and tell you it'll be all right.

I can not make promises
that your life will be a breeze
That as you grow older
you will not feel hurtful tears.

But as you work your way through them
comfort you will find
in remembering not in yesterdays
because tomorrow is what you will find.

(c) FH 13/11/2000

Expressions,
are the most important aspects, they create impressions

0'.".'0  Just
((T))    Thinking
(..)(..) Of you
(```)_(```)

© Copyright 2006 Fiona Davis (was Hussain) - All Rights Reserved
Sunshine
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1 posted 2006-01-29 11:41 AM



Fee...I know you
wrote this for our Kacy...

but so many will take
something good from it,
for themselves.

Well done!

~*~

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2 posted 2006-01-29 01:50 PM


Fiona, thank you, so very very much, for sharing this write. It's hard to know where to begin, how to stop this cycle. Hopefully, the more who refuse to be quiet about it, the less incidents there will be in the future.
thank you!

Charisma
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3 posted 2006-01-29 02:36 PM


heartfelt penned,
Thank you for sharing

(((hugs)))
Charisma

RedStoneEB
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4 posted 2006-01-29 03:05 PM


We pull ourselves through life knowing tomorrow will come and be different for us all
Fee
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5 posted 2006-01-29 04:18 PM


Thank you all kindly for your replies.

I think as we speak up and voice how wrong this is, we also need to speak up to let the victoms know that they are not to blame.

Heartfelt thanks to you all.

Lets keep raising our voices, in hope that we will be heard.

Biggest hugs to all.  Fee

Expressions,
are the most important aspects, they create impressions

0'.".'0  Just
((T))    Thinking
(..)(..) Of you
(```)_(```)

Midnitesun
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6 posted 2006-01-29 10:00 PM


quote:
we also need to speak up to let the victims know that they are not to blame


that is such an important part of the message, a part that gets lost sometimes!
hugs to you, thank you for this!

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