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Dominique-Simone
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0 posted 2006-01-10 12:29 PM



It was never the morning
That inspired me
Left behind the veils of sleep
I would wander crazed into a cup of coffee
Searching
Lifting my spirits with each
Raging bang of the clock
Time marches on as my coffees disappears
Goodnight coffee
You have done good
Creating false alertness that hides the shadows
Underneath my eyes

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1 posted 2006-01-10 12:35 PM


lol
you been sneakin into my mornings

Dominique-Simone
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2 posted 2006-01-10 06:45 AM


well imagine that...
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3 posted 2006-01-10 02:29 PM


I love my coffee--and your style...

much enjoying your work

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4 posted 2006-01-10 09:17 PM


It never hides the ones under my eyes!

Oh...but that first cup,  so refresing...

Enjoyed the read, thanx...

Dominique-Simone
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5 posted 2006-01-10 09:18 PM


You are welcome.. thank you both
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Riding
6 posted 2006-01-11 02:13 AM


mmmm coffee... if I didn't have coffee, the world around me would suffer

and then He created the horse...

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7 posted 2006-01-11 03:19 AM


It's 2:18 a.m. and I'm still drinking it.  Can I tell you how cute this is!  LOL
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