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Open Poetry #37

M(oo)shr(u)m Cl(u)(o)d

Edward Grim
Senior Member

since 2005-12-18

Posts 1154
Greenville, South Carolina

0 posted 2006-01-26 10:30 PM

M(oo)shr(u)m Cl(u)(o)d

Goes a fallin’,
until arrival.
Boom
that roars.
Sad faced mannequins
with charred wooden arms,
burn.
Bars upon their
car windows
that inhibit their
urge
to tap upon the glass.
no sorrow
in forgotten destruction.

They read but not very well.

Momma says, "Life... is like a box full of chocolates, you never know when you're gonna get one with a nut in it".

The Lady
Member Rara Avis

since 2005-12-26

Posts 7634
The Southwest

1 posted 2006-01-27 12:02 PM

"Sad faced mannequins
with charred wooden arms,
burn."

All so real. Well done.

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