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shades of paul
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since 2005-12-14
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In Reality

0 posted 2006-01-23 09:31 AM



On the night of the 8th day,
thine eyes close to pillow secrets.
Drifting away the awakeness floats,
to a land of enchantment far away.
Enter thy queen, royal in velvet sweetness,
thru large billows of white clouds.
A suductive wink, the temptress of eden,
waved the wand in circles of eight.
My gaze in trace, your wish is my command.
paul


shades of peace,love,and happiness to you

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Rex Allen McCoy
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Sippin a Timmy's in London
1 posted 2006-01-23 09:43 AM


Enjoyed your thoughts here


shades of paul
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2 posted 2006-01-23 10:10 AM


Thank you for your reply Rex,have a good day....paul

shades of peace,love,and happiness to you

ThisDiamond
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3 posted 2006-01-23 12:55 PM


Awesome write.
TD

shades of paul
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4 posted 2006-01-23 06:13 PM


thank you,Td....paul

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