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Aenimal
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-18

Posts 7350
the ass-end of space

0 posted 2006-01-23 03:59 AM

torquemada eyes
and that clock, that cursed clock
each tick a gavel fall,
a sentence passed

i know my sins, deadheart
but what of yours?

littlewing
Member Rara Avis

since 2003-03-02

Posts 9655
New York

1 posted 2006-01-23 09:43 AM

Ohhh this is awesome . .
there is more to this one, I feel it

Reminds me of Blake, Poe and Kesey sitting around waiting for Bukowski to show up.

And I just looked up torquemada . . .

Very appropriate sentiments, indeed.

Dark Angel
Member Patricius

since 1999-08-04

Posts 10095

2 posted 2006-01-23 02:31 PM

"that cursed clock"

mannaggia la gallina, yes Bello, that cursed clock.

hugs

love this, and you

so glad you're writing

m xx

how i would love you, love you as no one ever did! Die and still, love you more. And still love you more..and more
~Neruda~

Kaoru

Member Elite

since 2003-06-07

Posts 3892
where the wild flowers grow

3 posted 2006-01-23 07:01 PM

Whew.. I'm lost. I'm so enamored by your poetry, it's always so artfully done, so indescribable. I hope you know that.

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

4 posted 2006-01-23 07:20 PM

Excellent, Raph...
so do you find your words
under that blanket?

.

ecrivan
Member Elite

since 2001-12-10

Posts 3923
my own state

5 posted 2006-01-23 10:14 PM

hey Ralph

Good to read between the lines...managia la miseria life la vita va avanti...

Midnitesun

Member Empyrean

since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

6 posted 2006-01-23 10:33 PM

chilling comparisons here Raphie
Torquemada *shudder*

Ratleader

Member Rara Avis

since 2003-01-23

Posts 7026
Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass

7 posted 2006-01-23 11:51 PM

Each tick is a separate sin.....against us all.

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______________Ratleader______________

Aenimal
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-18

Posts 7350
the ass-end of space

8 posted 2006-01-23 11:58 PM

thanks sue, i couldn't even wait their table..grin

tanculo very much bella

thanks megs, where you been?!

karilea unfortunately very empty under those blankets..sssssssigh

ecrivan, piu indietro al momento, merci

thanks kacy, what's frightening is that, though i meant it metaphorically, the possibility of other torquemada's isn't that far fetched with the way things are going on this toilet..er planet

**slipped in there as i was responding, thanks ed. that they are

[This message has been edited by Aenimal (01-24-2006 12:00 AM).]

Bridget Shenachie
Senior Member

since 2002-01-23

Posts 1056
Kansas USA

9 posted 2006-01-24 12:49 PM

You sent me running for the dictionary with "torquemada". My mind and body needed the exercise. And you did make me think as I sit and wail, "Whatever happened to love and acceptance." "Live and let live." In these days of escalating tensions and paranoia, it's difficult to think of anything intelligent to say.

Well said, Aenimal.

Shenachie

littlewing
Member Rara Avis

since 2003-03-02

Posts 9655
New York

10 posted 2006-01-24 07:56 AM

Sure you could, you fit right in with that lot, Raph. Man, you'd be sitting there.

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