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martina
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since 2003-06-19
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0 posted 2006-01-21 09:08 PM



At times I wonder why god gave me life. Times I wonder why I am the way I am. I wonder if people would be better off without me. I cry knowing my life wouldn't be the same without you cause if there was no you I would not be here today. Knowing you don't feel the same breaks my heart wanting to hear your voice, wanting to be held by your arms so tight. Feeling like I'm just a dumb teenage girl with dreams, knowing one person thinks more of me then I myself thinks. No one shows they care more then you. Wanting to smile but can't because just not being around you makes me ill. Not being able to breath till I smell your smell. Shivering in the cold till I see you snow stops falling the brisk cold air stops blowing. Where would I be without you I wonder to myself.

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Bodger
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since 2005-06-12
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Tolerance for a short time
1 posted 2006-01-22 11:22 AM


This almost reads like an emotive download

So much to say and so little time

Pashion is immense, it corrodes the brain, destroys emotion feeling provoking behaviour changes

Some call it love

Dave

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