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Open Poetry #37

The Day of Susan

poettothecars
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since 2006-02-10

Posts 1093
New Zealand

0 posted 2006-05-18 04:27 AM

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The Day of Susan
22 January 2006

Remember that day
this day Susan was there
Her arms around him
holding on to him tight
That day Susan arrived
and then stayed the night

Just twenty four hours
of a whole world of life
She had been and again
to be another man's wife

What a trip when she arrived at the door
each hour to treasure for real and evermore
The day of this earth - Susan
was there in everything of appeal

Two souls connected
arms upon him in bodies joined
Purely platonic as two friends could
this day of earth into the sunset
on a four wheeler ATV
Susan and him would

“And the LORD God formed man of the dust of
the ground, and breathed into his nostrils the
breath of life; and man became a living soul.”
Genesis 2: 7 KJV

© 2006 Christopher W Herbert (a New Zealand Poet)

a poet who cares

[This message has been edited by poettothecars (05-18-2006 09:47 AM).]

SEA

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Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

1 posted 2006-05-18 08:37 AM

this touches more than you could imagine.

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