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poe
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Heading to China

0 posted 2006-01-21 03:31 AM


Awash with colours and sounds
My eyes lost amongst all the worlds’ creations
From the turtle to the canyon
My sense are being overwhelmed
I am what you would call a life tourist
The Great Lakes and the sphinx will still be
When I am not
The beauty that is in creation is one that can not be measured
My minds spinning like a globe in a third grade classroom
My odometer has turned over several times
Yet there is so much more for my gaze to fixate upon
My spirit has soared with the eagles
My heart has plunged to the depths with the dolphin
I have lived my life like the roller coaster it is meant to be
At times my heart was in my throat
Others I was screaming
Even when it comes time to step off this ride
Given a second chance I would ride it all over again
From Berlin to Sydney my footprints are there
Like most tourists I began life thinking this is not what the brochure showed me
Yet once that disappointment subsided
My trip became that of pure fantasy
For if you look closely life is just like the movies
Yet the Nay Sayers will try and bring you down
Though life is too short for this
The best way to live is
To think that you forgot your camera
And the only way too make it up is with memories

Tomorrow comes for those who fear it.
Today never ends for those who live it.

© Copyright 2006 Poe Wilson - All Rights Reserved
iliana
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1 posted 2006-01-21 03:35 AM


You're so right, poe!  Enjoyed this and wishing you the best....jo
Juju
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2 posted 2006-01-21 04:52 AM


wonderful write.

-Juju

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Enchantress
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3 posted 2006-01-21 09:41 AM


"Like most tourists I began life thinking this is not what the brochure showed me
Yet once that disappointment subsided
My trip became that of pure fantasy
For if you look closely life is just like the movies
Yet the Nay Sayers will try and bring you down
Though life is too short for this
The best way to live is
To think that you forgot your camera
And the only way too make it up is with memories"


How very true this is!!
You have expressed the way life is so well poe.
~Sending hugs your way, Nancy~

In the midst of winter,
I found there lives within me..
An invincible summer.

Martie
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4 posted 2006-01-21 08:52 PM


poe

"The best way to live is
To think that you forgot your camera
And the only way too make it up is with memories"

This made me smile, because I so often forget my camera, or film, or the batteries are dead.  So I write a poem instead of a picture, and all is well.  I enjoyed reading your poem!  

Midnitesun
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5 posted 2006-01-21 09:13 PM


My spirit has soared with the eagles
My heart has plunged to the depths with the dolphin
I have lived my life like the roller coaster it is meant to be
At times my heart was in my throat
Others I was screaming
Even when it comes time to step off this ride
Given a second chance I would ride it all over again"

me too, poe, me too...kicking and screaming all the way probably LOL

tracie66
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6 posted 2006-01-21 09:14 PM


Poe~
What a fabulous write, enjoyed the read...thanks for sharing this with us.

all the best ~hugs~
Tracie

Love is the life of the soul...
It is the harmony of the universe
                        — W. E. Channing



The Lady
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7 posted 2006-01-22 01:06 AM





"I have lived my life like the roller coaster it is meant to be
At times my heart was in my throat
Others I was screaming
Even when it comes time to step off this ride
Given a second chance I would ride it all over again"

Magnificent Poe.

poe
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Posts 180
Heading to China
8 posted 2006-01-22 03:19 AM


Thank you, iliana. I hope I am right.
Thank you, Juju.
Thank you, Enchantress.
Thank you, Martie. Don't we all but we always seem agitated when this happens. When it may have been a good thing.
Thank you, Midnitesun. Well you would have to because you would be a kid again at some point.
Thank you, tracie66. I should be thanking you for reading not the other way around.
Thank you, The Lady.

Tomorrow comes for those who fear it.
Today never ends for those who live it.

OwlSA
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9 posted 2006-01-25 11:30 AM


Loved this!  Hope you haven't left Passions yet.  I have had no phone for about 5 days.  It took Telkom ages to get around to fixing it.

- Owl

aujussy wolf
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10 posted 2006-01-25 01:18 PM


Though life is too short for this
The best way to live is
To think that you forgot your camera
And the only way too make it up is with memories
      
  

Tomorrow comes for those who fear it.
Today never ends for those who live it.

Poe : ) great writing sir poe , well formed and placed with precision , i liked it  and remember you never have to leave , just take a vacation lol peace bro , ~J

Earth Angel
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11 posted 2006-01-25 01:31 PM


What a stirring and compelling write! We should live each moment we are blessed with ~ and to the fullest!

Life is rife with Kodak moments! ~ and it sounds as though you have had your fair share of them! May your trip to China bring many more!

Love & Life,
EA


Susan Caldwell
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12 posted 2006-01-25 01:36 PM


Wonderful stuff here Poe.

"too bad ignorance isn't painful"
~Unknown~

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