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bubblesleave
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0 posted 2006-05-13 11:30 PM



Through any window,
I see the moment turn
into the windswept whispers.
Turn into the hard, unburnable reality of the nothing that is all.
Turn the day into a night of wings.

Through any mirror,
I see the face turn
into the child that is the fiend unto the angel.
Turn into the eternity of the nothing that is all.
Turn into the voice that sings.

Through any lover
I see the twisted shadows
turn into the eternity of the nothing that is all

that

has turned into me!

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Margherita
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Eternity
1 posted 2006-05-14 09:28 AM


Truth beautifully expressed!

... and wonderful awareness!

Love,
Margherita

Liz Sinclair
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since 2006-05-06
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Atlantis
2 posted 2006-05-16 12:04 PM


Metaphorically speaking, it's a gem.  There are nicely woven thoughts within in each frame.  Thanks for sharing.

Liz...Carpe Diem

XOx Uriah xOX
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3 posted 2006-05-16 12:09 PM


::smiles::    Yes     :: bows ::
bubblesleave
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4 posted 2006-05-16 12:10 PM


Thank You!

I do so, very much, appreciate your comments!


Sharon (Bubbles)

Kathy
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5 posted 2006-05-16 12:23 PM


Oh, this is a good one Sharon!

Turn:
I Like it!!!


Take care girl.
Kathy

bubblesleave
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6 posted 2006-05-16 12:24 PM


Thank You Kathy!
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