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sim0riah
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0 posted 2006-05-12 11:43 AM



As the sun reaches down
It's warmth soothing
Wraps around my thoughts
My thoughts of you

Your smile
Brings color to my world
The sparkle from your eyes
beats my heart

I dream of your touch
I long for your soul
My heart aches without you
Since then, I'm still cold

Only at night you can see the depth of the sun

Sim0riah

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S Arthur Grey
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since 2001-03-19
Posts 719
woven by a poet's loom
1 posted 2006-05-12 02:03 PM


I know the feeling.
Like standing in a cold breeze in the bright sun.
And it is chilly here today.

Bodger
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since 2005-06-12
Posts 1260
Tolerance for a short time
2 posted 2006-05-12 02:17 PM


Nice simple romance

One of the best chemical treatments there is

Gets the heart racing, the pulse pounding, the world seems to be a blue sky

Brain kicking like mad, sense gone, passion "arwey"

Feels good

Dave

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