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froggy
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since 2003-06-23
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0 posted 2006-01-20 01:35 PM



Note: Just playing around with words
:-)

Since You Been Gone

Tell me when
this heartache
will ease, these tears
to stop falling.
Tell me when
will I start living
again without you.

© Copyright 2006 E.Griswold - All Rights Reserved
Fee
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since 2000-08-07
Posts 381
Melbourne, Australia
1 posted 2006-01-20 09:45 PM


These words hold alot of meaning.

Keep writing,

Hugs Fee

Expressions,
are the most important aspects, they create impressions

0'.".'0  Just
((T))    Thinking
(..)(..) Of you
(```)_(```)

jody5
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since 2005-12-21
Posts 876
California, U.S.A.
2 posted 2006-01-20 09:56 PM


This is what I call relationship withdrawls.  Its exactly what some people go through in a break up. Your poem is truth!


froggy
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3 posted 2006-01-20 11:31 PM


Thank-you Fee for the comment.

:-)

Until he extends the circle of his compassion to all living things,
man will not himself find peace."

Albert Schweitzer,
Nobel Peace Prize Wi

froggy
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4 posted 2006-01-20 11:32 PM


Thank-you Jody5 for the comment.

:-)

Until he extends the circle of his compassion to all living things,
man will not himself find peace."

Albert Schweitzer,
Nobel Peace Prize Wi

ecrivan
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5 posted 2006-01-20 11:51 PM


feel free to write what you feel, the words
will follow


The Lady
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6 posted 2006-01-21 12:35 PM




Nice job of playing around.

Bodger
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Tolerance for a short time
7 posted 2006-01-21 04:10 PM


Dear Froggy

Nice words

Dave

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8 posted 2006-01-21 06:19 PM


Enjoyed your "playing around with words" : D)
Huggies,
Ethel

miscellanea
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9 posted 2006-01-21 09:23 PM


Can't tell ya, froggy.  When I think all my sensitivity has gone, I watch a sad movie and cry like a baby!  Just watched "The Notebook" tonight and became a sniffling mess!  Good luck to you.

miscellanea

BugBuggy
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since 2005-12-19
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10 posted 2006-01-21 10:45 PM


froggy..... you did good really enjoyed your word play....

bugBUGGY

froggy
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11 posted 2006-01-21 11:57 PM


Thank-you The Lady for the comment.

:-)

Until he extends the circle of his compassion to all living things,
man will not himself find peace."

Albert Schweitzer,
Nobel Peace Prize Wi

froggy
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since 2003-06-23
Posts 1893
Michigan
12 posted 2006-01-21 11:58 PM


Thank-you Martin.

Until he extends the circle of his compassion to all living things,
man will not himself find peace."

Albert Schweitzer,
Nobel Peace Prize Wi

froggy
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Posts 1893
Michigan
13 posted 2006-01-21 11:59 PM


Thank-you Dave for the comment.

:-)

Until he extends the circle of his compassion to all living things,
man will not himself find peace."

Albert Schweitzer,
Nobel Peace Prize Wi

froggy
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Posts 1893
Michigan
14 posted 2006-01-22 12:01 PM


Thank-you Ethel for the comment.
Hugs back to you.

:-)

Until he extends the circle of his compassion to all living things,
man will not himself find peace."

Albert Schweitzer,
Nobel Peace Prize Wi

froggy
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since 2003-06-23
Posts 1893
Michigan
15 posted 2006-01-22 12:02 PM


Thank-you Misc. for the comment.


:-)

Until he extends the circle of his compassion to all living things,
man will not himself find peace."

Albert Schweitzer,
Nobel Peace Prize Wi

froggy
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since 2003-06-23
Posts 1893
Michigan
16 posted 2006-01-22 12:03 PM


Thank-you BugBuggy for the comment.

:-)

Until he extends the circle of his compassion to all living things,
man will not himself find peace."

Albert Schweitzer,
Nobel Peace Prize Wi

iliana
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since 2003-12-05
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USA
17 posted 2006-01-22 01:23 AM


Just hugs, froggy....jo
froggy
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18 posted 2006-01-22 11:28 AM


Thank-you Jo for the hugs.
Sending hugs to you as well.

:-)

Until he extends the circle of his compassion to all living things,
man will not himself find peace."

Albert Schweitzer,
Nobel Peace Prize Wi

Bodger
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Tolerance for a short time
19 posted 2006-01-22 03:09 PM


And that haven't seen the painting

Quality

Dave

froggy
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Michigan
20 posted 2006-01-22 03:23 PM


Thank-you Dave.
:-)

Hugs

Until he extends the circle of his compassion to all living things,
man will not himself find peace."

Albert Schweitzer,
Nobel Peace Prize Wi

Earth Angel
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since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215
Realms of Light
21 posted 2006-01-23 06:50 PM


Well, for starters, dear froggy friend, I am relieved to know that this sad poem is  the result of you just playing around with words!

They sure sounded real! I guess that makes you a talented and empathetic poetess!

Hugs o' love,
Linda

froggy
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since 2003-06-23
Posts 1893
Michigan
22 posted 2006-01-25 04:04 PM


Thank-you Linda for the sweet comment.

:-)

Until he extends the circle of his compassion to all living things,
man will not himself find peace."

Albert Schweitzer,
Nobel Peace Prize Wi

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