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DejaEntendu
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since 2005-12-06
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0 posted 2006-01-20 07:49 AM



The pendelum swings,
as patient as day one,
praying for release,
which never comes.

© Copyright 2006 G Rapp - All Rights Reserved
steavenr
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since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058

1 posted 2006-01-20 04:38 PM


and those of us who are bound by time are sentenced to live by the rules therein...

a quiet, subtle write...lots of still waters running deep in this one...well done...

kevinbrianwright
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since 2006-01-19
Posts 35
NYC
2 posted 2006-01-20 04:52 PM


Nicely penned..great job!

Kevin Brian Wright

jody5
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since 2005-12-21
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3 posted 2006-01-20 04:57 PM


Well spoken


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