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Bodger
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Tolerance for a short time

0 posted 2006-05-01 03:14 PM


Chestnut in that strand that swung silhouetted
Framed by short cut fringe decorated by shadows
Trevassed by volcanic eyes melted into sunlight

And within my image on the water in my innermost sense


Looks like another ten years

Dave

Darken clouds halo’d light to imagine you
Worlds spun
Quiet smile
Silencing windswept breath saluting
In motion

Earth held it’s gaze
In an image in translucent light

Quiet smile
Silencing windswept breath saluting
In motion

Edited by me

Dave

[This message has been edited by Bodger (05-02-2006 04:46 PM).]

© Copyright 2006 Dave Page - Cirencester UK - All Rights Reserved
Ericc
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1 posted 2006-05-01 07:11 PM


Excellent write Dave.

Eric

Bodger
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Tolerance for a short time
2 posted 2006-05-01 07:29 PM


Thanks Eric

But I still have to print off the RAC and read it

Poetry, I can tell you, is easy, compared to that

Dave

froggy
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since 2003-06-23
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Michigan
3 posted 2006-05-01 08:08 PM


You always amaze with your words.
Enjoyed the read.

:-)

Until he extends the circle of his compassion to all living things,
man will not himself find peace."

Albert Schweitzer,
Nobel Peace Prize Wi

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14
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Canada eh.
4 posted 2006-05-01 08:21 PM


Much enjoyed the read as always Dave.
Hugs~Nancy

~ Trace my body with your words,
  in doing so, you touch my heart ~

iliana
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since 2003-12-05
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USA
5 posted 2006-05-02 01:43 AM


Awesome...you're right, you know.
Bodger
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Tolerance for a short time
6 posted 2006-05-02 01:09 PM


Thanks but I have tried to edit it and I wont put any words to it until I feel they are there

Dave

The Lady
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since 2005-12-26
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The Southwest
7 posted 2006-05-03 10:39 PM




I vote with the others. You have a beautiful way with words.


Bodger
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Tolerance for a short time
8 posted 2006-05-08 12:26 PM


No my lady

Words have a beautiful way with me

Dave

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