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Open Poetry #37

Soul

evomx5
Member

since 2005-07-11

Posts 52
Atlanta, GA

0 posted 2006-04-25 04:44 PM

In the deepest reaches of the human soul
Where is kept humanity, humility and pride
Promised to God upon our death
Promised to love in our life
Untouchable but to that one
Who has found the way inside
And walks among our frailties
The one to whom we give our love

She walks inside my soul
It is home to her
A dwelling place for her, alone
To find comfort and to bring comfort
To see my strengths
To see my weaknesses
To feel my pain and weep with me
To touch my joy in loving her

None could take her place
For none could find the path
That God, Himself, has shown her
That she followed to my soul
And there she shall remain
For the rest of my time on earth
My humanity, my humility, my pride
My love, my life, my soul.

SEA

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Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

1 posted 2006-05-21 09:14 PM

"She walks inside my soul
It is home to her
A dwelling place for her, alone
To find comfort and to bring comfort
To see my strengths
To see my weaknesses
To feel my pain and weep with me
To touch my joy in loving her"

romantic, loving and so beautiful....

I can't believe no one has replied to this one yet!!

Nightshade

Member Patricius

since 2001-08-31

Posts 13962
just out of reach

2 posted 2006-05-21 09:42 PM

breathtaking !!
hugs, Chris

Poetry is an echo, asking a shadow to dance.
~Carl Sandburg

Jacer Ace
New Member

since 2006-05-12

Posts 5
North Caroline, USA

3 posted 2006-05-22 12:12 PM

Really Really good
A true story of love for another
T.T

bubblesleave
Member

since 2006-03-04

Posts 197
Bloomington, IN

4 posted 2006-05-22 11:32 PM

I like this!

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