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OwlSA
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0 posted 2006-04-20 05:16 PM



FAIRY TALE
December 1998

Perhaps we all cling to our own favourite fairy tale.

For some, it is a dream of unrequited love
that remains perfect
because it is unsullied by reality;

For others, it is the search that counts,
a need for a perpetual quest
for the love we desire
and which must be rejected
before it is tested
in case the quest ends in success;

For some, it is the languishing sense of loneliness
in the refusal to compromise
on a vision of impossible perfection;

For others, it is in poetically spurning
the happiness one has - or two have - or could have, with a little work,
until it is lost;

For yet others, it is the belief
that we can stuff our mouths with all the cake on the plate
which will magically replenish itself
without our help.

When will we all realise
that it is only
imperfection
that can heighten and lend character to perfection
and only we can make that so?

The choice is
a safe, lonely, passive dream
or precarious, active reality.

- Owl

© Copyright 2006 Diana van den Berg - All Rights Reserved
XOx Uriah xOX
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1 posted 2006-04-20 05:48 PM


::smiles::    Wonderful write!  You never cease to impress me.    :: bows ::
OwlSA
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2 posted 2006-04-20 05:50 PM


Thank you Uriah.  I am honoured by your reply.

- Owl

StevenS
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3 posted 2006-04-20 07:20 PM


I feel pretty smart seeing eye to eye with a wise Owl! Enjoyed! :-)
Debo
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4 posted 2006-04-20 08:29 PM


Truethful write Owl
As truthful as we preceive
It in our dreams...

Debo

Martie
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5 posted 2006-04-20 09:02 PM


Diana....you see life with a poetic wise-owl's eye...I lke that and this!!  
The Lady
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6 posted 2006-04-21 12:08 PM




"The choice is
a safe, lonely, passive dream
or precarious, active reality."

Yes, wisdom is the word for this one Diana.  Thank you for this jewel.



WindWalker
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7 posted 2006-04-21 10:01 AM


I agree, wisdom is the word for this one!!!!
Excellent writing!!!!!!!!!!!!

OwlSA
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8 posted 2006-04-21 01:23 PM


Giggles, Steven.  You ARE smart.  

Thank you for calling me wise, Steven, (Debo by inference), Martie, Kate and Windwalker - and for the kind words of all of you.  Wisdom is something I admire and respect tremendously and it is one of the things I aspire to most - and to be called wise, by so many people whom I admire and respect means a great deal to me.  

- Owl

luminosity
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9 posted 2006-04-21 06:41 PM


wonderful write......very thought provoking
Klassy Lassy
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10 posted 2006-04-22 02:34 AM


Diana, what an observer you are, and I'm thinking you know exactly what steps to take to walk your path to fulfillment.  I can't really add much to what the others have written, but I concur...it is wise and well-rounded in it's points, and you've penned it beautifully! Anyway one looks at love, it does not leave them where it finds them!

~ Karen

Earth Angel
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11 posted 2006-04-22 01:15 PM


You do your wise kin proud, Dear Owl! Owl 2

May all your dreams and fantasies become your reality!

Love & Hugs,
Linda
Flowers

Ericc
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12 posted 2006-04-22 04:24 PM


Wonderful write!

Eric

OwlSA
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13 posted 2006-04-23 01:50 PM


Thank you luminosity.  I love provoking thought, probably mostly because of the pleasure I get out of Thinking - I see it as an activity - and I hope that others get as much enjoyment out of it as I do.

Thank you Karen for seeing me as an observer and my poem as wise, well-rounded and beautifully penned.  I don't think many people would see my life as fulfilled - but I most certainly do.  Like everyone else's, I would imagine, it hasn't been an easy one, but I squeeze every song and tear out of it.  I love your succint truth of love not leaving us where it finds us.

Earth Angel, thank your for loving owls (I know you do, otherwise you wouldn't have said what you did!) and for that adorable, flattering graphic of me, and the cute Earth Angel and the flower - as well as the good wishes and the love and hugs.  Lots to you too.

Thank you Ericc.  I am glad you enjoyed it.

- Owl

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