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ManOfWolves28
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0 posted 2006-01-17 08:11 PM



tip tap tip tap
tip tap tip tap
tip tap tip tap
tip tap tip tap
boom boom boom boom boom
boom boom boom boom boom
squeak squeak squeak squeak
..........
tip tap tip tap
tip tap tip tap (dripping water)
tip tap tip tap
tip tap tip tap

boom, boom, boom, boom, boom
boom ,boom, boom, boom, boom (stomping)

squeak, squeak, squeak, squeak (wrench)

...............(silence)

spishhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh (spraying water)

squeak, squeak, squeak, squeak
squeak, squeak, squeak, squeak
squeak, squeak, squeak, squeak
sqeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeek
tip tap tip tap
tip tap tip tap
tip tap tip tap
tip tap tip tap
tip tap tip tap
tip tap tip tap
tip tap tip tap
tip tap tip tap

zzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz (giving up and goin back to bed)

May the winds sweep through the moonless sky....

© Copyright 2006 J. A. Griswold - All Rights Reserved
froggy
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Michigan
1 posted 2006-01-18 09:27 PM


Makes me have to go vist the powder room LOL
Very good read.

:-)

ManOfWolves28
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2 posted 2006-01-19 03:41 PM


So go do that. Im not stoppin ya. LOL Have to visit that room myself after reading it....or was that from the coffee?

May the winds sweep through the moonless sky....

Midnitesun
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Gaia
3 posted 2006-01-19 04:55 PM


lol
and to think, some people buy fancy little fountains, just to hear that very sound...nonstop
a good fun read

steavenr
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4 posted 2006-01-19 05:38 PM


wow...what a well-to-do onomatopoeiac offering...

I'll give this to my wife to explain why I haven't fixed ours...thanks...

enjoyed...

ManOfWolves28
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5 posted 2006-01-20 12:01 PM


Im glad you all enjoyed this so far. I dont write as much as I did years back but I still write from time to time.

May the winds sweep through the moonless sky....

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