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Deep_Inside
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i can't stop hiding

0 posted 2006-04-08 10:15 PM



If I where to throw a rock
From a mountain side
It would knock loose bigger rocks
As it continued on it's ride

Growing bigger and bigger
With each second past
Starting with almost nothing
But now it's growing fast

Flowing even faster
Now trees can't even hold it's rage
Braking through walls and barriers
It won't be held in this cage

This is what happened that night
standing there kissing you
We stood atop that mountain side
Together and we and through

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Earth Angel
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Realms of Light
1 posted 2006-04-08 11:08 PM


Now that is what I'd call an earth-moving KISS!
Fireworks Kiss


EA

Musicmaker1969
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2 posted 2006-04-09 01:49 AM


Sounds like the mountains really did move for you.  A very loving and compassionate poem.  I hope that your love will last forever and that the mountains will only stop moving when one of you passes to the other side.  A beautiful poem for sure.  Well done.

Sheri Adams

Jesus lives in my heart!  He can in yours too!!!
Sheri Liegh Adams
sheriliegh@sympatico.ca

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