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bklynboy
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florida

0 posted 2006-01-17 01:18 AM



I spoke your name today;

the robbins all came home again;

upon these frozen limbs
on wounded trees,
the winter willows,
relieved of plagues
that hadn't yet
begun to seize,

instead,
the newborn leaves;

a climbing trellis
making picture windows,

a christening,
of purple ink,

the resurrection,
of the impressionist's dream,

a celebration !

the timezone freed!

i spoke your name today;

on frozen lips,
a triology
of letters kissed,

and warmed the sting
when mourners grieve.

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Aenimal
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1 posted 2006-01-17 04:36 AM


very nice write

i'd have to guess inkedgoddess

littlewing
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2 posted 2006-01-17 07:50 AM


Good Lord yes, Miss Inked for sure.
Beautiful job indeed!

I miss her already . . .

Martie
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3 posted 2006-01-17 09:32 AM


I'm going to guess, Michele, too.  Well done!!
Dark Angel
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4 posted 2006-01-17 04:36 PM


Magnificent!

and yes most definitely the Inked one.

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how i would love you, love you as no one ever did! Die and still, love you more. And still love you more..and more
~Neruda~

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5 posted 2006-01-17 04:41 PM


I agree and beautiful it was too.
Juju
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6 posted 2006-01-17 05:03 PM


lovely


-Juju

Juju - 1.) a magic charm or fetish 2.)Magic 3.)A taboo connected woth the use of magic

The dictionary never lies.... I am magical (;

jody5
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7 posted 2006-01-17 05:09 PM


This poem is beautiful.  I can see the entire picture of what you are saying. It is art in its true form.
bklynboy
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8 posted 2006-01-17 08:17 PM


Thanks for all the kind words!
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